The Jin Army Besieged the City and Jolted Me Awake: The Con Artist Was Me All Along

The writing may not be that top-notch, but it can be seen that the author has practiced writing or has ideas in mind. It was very interesting to work hard and think about it, and to think about it when I first started the book. After writing a better plot, I tried different ways of connecting it and tried different narrative styles. 1. The writing of the article is smooth and coherent. The author's ideas continue to change as he thinks more deeply, giving it a sense of growth. Due to the plain writing style, the changes do not cause discomfort, which is a coincidence. 2. The exploration of different writing methods not only does not bring confusion in perception, but also brings a kind of vitality? How optimistic is the author himself about his book? ? It's a coincidence that it's so cute that I want to laugh. 3. There are many plots, not to mention the logic, but the story is very rounded. There should be a lot of changes in ideas, and a lot of thinking about the story. It also has a bit of romantic overtones, which is fun to watch. What a coincidence. As the saying goes, the article was made by nature, and a clever hand found it accidentally. What a coincidence. [Laughing evilly][Learned]

Very good, except for Zhu Xiaoyou, who is a bit poisonous, everything else is great👍🏻Of course, it is also possible that the author regarded her as a patch ——Because the protagonist has many ideas that were very difficult to implement in ancient times and were easy to see through, and the character Zhu Xiaoyou almost does not have to worry about leaks - she already knows that Guo Jing is pretending, and she has the weakness of Emperor Fu Ning. However, I would like to give the author a small suggestion - everyone comes to Tomato to read cool articles, at least because of all the unsatisfactory life in order to seek mental relaxation. Therefore, the relationship between Guo Jing and Zhu Xiaoyou is destined to be unpopular with readers. I suggest the author change their relationship model (you can use Guo Jing to provide some very touching help or see through his identity as an alien visitor).

The language is quite humorous. The male protagonist does not have a golden finger, but he has a little bit of it. There are many coincidences. It is no coincidence that the book is written. The male protagonist is also quite knowledgeable. He is very good at science. The logic is very smooth. Everyone plays their role normally. It is attractive to keep reading. It is a good book.

The writing is not very rigorous, but the story is not bad. It is easy in the early stage and the plot has some laughs. However, the character creation is still a bit lacking. I hope that the difficulty will be increased later and the image of the magic stick will be more three-dimensional to win the high-end game. Overall, it can be regarded as a semi-refreshing article, but it is not completely brainless.

Very exciting, Guo Jing is also interesting. Please keep up the good work, [laughs] Wonderful! ! ! This old Guo is about to become a master of cross talk, [laughing and crying] [covering face] [covering face] I solemnly recommend good books in two places: It is said that there was a magic stick named Guo Jing in the late Northern Song Dynasty. His story is pleasant to tell. Humorous and witty like De Gang, Exaggeration and magic are different. Friends, come and take a look when you have time, This is a different Northern Song Dynasty, It's different from Jingkang! @ Zero

It's good to watch. The main character is a magic stick who is always on the verge of burping. I've read a lot of stories but I've never seen anyone with this identity. It's very good.

There is no system, every step is carefully considered, and the carelessness is stratagem and calculation. It is really good to watch. If the names of the dynasties were changed, it would be an excellent costume drama script. Come on, author! The male protagonist is so cute, funny and strong-willed! I don't understand why a bad book with a white background can get a score of 9, but this kind of good book can get a score of 9 or less. Really worth a look.

After reading it, after reading it, I will update it quickly. This book is also quite rigorous. There are not many pitfalls. It is the one who makes the gun. I feel that replacing it with a bamboo tube musket or a fire dragon gun is more in line with the forging technology at the time. Going straight to the flintlock gun feels a bit advanced, but it is still satisfactory for time travellers. All in all, it's pretty good. I hope it won't be unfinished or discontinued.

Speaking of which, I first read this novel elsewhere. I read more than 30 chapters in a year and it was addictive. It was very enjoyable. Although there are some flaws, fortunately, the author made timely adjustments and they are harmless. Without the system's mechanical deity, the author's writing is already very good. I highly recommend reading it.

It is indeed a good book. If you think about it carefully, the early setting actually has some shortcomings. Because it has never been popular, the author had no choice but to cut a lot of plots to speed up the pace in the later period, but at least it ended successfully. I have never seen this book before when Tomato recommended it to me a few days after the episode ended. If Tomato had supported this book earlier, I believe the author would not have been forced to write it better. My personal score is between 8.7-9.3. Everyone has their own ideas about the specific score, but this book definitely falls into the category of good books that you will not regret after reading. I hope the author's new book can maintain this style. To be honest, it is difficult to innovate in terms of subject matter, but for me, no matter whether the author of new or old subjects can continue to maintain this style, I can read it. As for whether it will be a hit or not, it's hard to give a solid idea even after reading it countless times. It is true that the plot design is not as eye-catching as the ones on the rankings, and the early settings are also a little immature. However, it is rare for this new author to be able to write like this, and I believe that he will have his own place in the future.