Traces of an Eternal Dream

It's so beautiful, but there are so few people. This Freebook is of super high quality. Is it a problem with the introduction?

I don't know why, although the ending is almost a happy ending, I still feel uncomfortable. The logic and plot of this book are really good, and the descriptions of each character are also very vivid and detailed. I feel that it is one of the few good books among the bestiality novels in Yang Persimmon (Yang Persimmon, what are you doing! Why are there so few people reading it!)

There is sugar in the plot, and there is also knives, slow knives. It's just that the setting of abilities makes me feel messy in the wind (mainly due to the confusing existence of gods)

I'm impressed by this foreign persimmon. Such a good book, but not many people have read it.

After reading the book, I only felt that there were a lot of regrets in the book. Although it seemed that there was a lot of sugar and sweetness in it when I read it, when I recalled it after reading it, I found that the knife was wrapped in the sweet sugar coating, which was full of regrets. In summary, it's great to watch and highly recommended.

It's great. I'm going to recommend this book. Cheers to the author!

It's really good to read [send my heart] [send my heart], why did I just find such a good book now? It's a book that starts low and goes high. After reading more than 40 chapters, I was completely hooked. The emotional line is very delicate, the plot arrangement is relatively compact, and there is no water mark. I like the character creation in it very much, it has a sense of group portrait, but my favorite is Shirahoshi (because I like the old ax the most hehe) [blowing kiss] [shy] I finally finished reading it intermittently (I'm going to spoil it). The whole story line is very good, but I felt that the subsequent plot was a bit rushed and the time span was a bit too big. . . The ending is as imagined as HE. I believe that the two of them will still be together sweetly after reincarnation. Emm I also feel that the characterization of Shirahoshi in the later stage is a bit empty, a bit like the protagonist's pendant, which is indescribably strange. But overall it is very good, and the creation of each character is remarkable (although Bai Xing wrote a lot, I still want to say that Bai Xing's lack of expression in the later period should be the obsession of Tiger Control). It is a very good book, but there is still room for improvement. I look forward to the author's sequel (new book), and I will support it! [Blowing kiss]

The writing has improved tremendously, and after getting through the jerky chapters at the beginning, it becomes very smooth. I had no experience at the beginning, and the writing, logic, and emotion were all a bit... Abstract, but later on it was much smoother and more natural, especially the chapter where Lin Luo came back and looked at Bai Xing and couldn't remember anything [shy] By the way, were A-lan and A-hong forgotten? Lin Luo's name was not even mentioned in the last scene in Huanmeng's dream [smile]

The plot is okay, the first part is more daily life, and the main plot in the back is more daily life. The plot of the last volume "Building Dreams, Reincarnation" is a bit rushed. The plot has both sugar and knives, but I personally think it has more sugar. The ending is pretty good (in my opinion) [laughs]

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