When He Becomes the Devil

This is much better than Shuangwen [Chigua]

For me, this is a good book. The words are clear and much better than some cool articles. However, there are some things that are not explained, which makes me a little confused. I also need more updates [smile].

Come on, author, if I think it is well received, I will go to major websites and platforms to share links for the later plot. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you.

The subject matter is good It's the foreshadowing of Tiandao's control. I don't quite understand it. Is it to wash away the three girls and then take them away? In this case, a large number of readers will be lost. But if it wasn't for the purpose of washing the three girls, then the subsequent torture of the three girls would be a bit laborious and boring. Also, the plot between the Nangong sisters and Ning is a bit strange. 1. Highlight the weakness and lack of vigilance of the protagonist. After all, someone who can give you a slave mark, how can you not be on guard against it. 2. I feel that it is a bit unacceptable to abuse Ning. For those of us who cannot accept it from a God's perspective, you might as well not tell me that Ning is fake (can the author please stop abusing Ning, and be gentle if you do [facepalm]). 3. Follow up on the protagonist's position. Righteous way: There are three women who can't forgive too quickly, and can't get in if they don't forgive. The Demonic Way: Being Schemed feels a little difficult to get in and needs to resolve Ning's matter first. However, Nangong Lin died and the staff was reduced immediately (she should be resurrected in the future). The master killed her for the protagonist. Alone: ​​You don't need any force, but you need to destroy the sky. Then the demonic path will come up (it is possible for the righteous path to find out that you have been deceived). Do you want to accept it or not? Anyway, I feel that because of the plot between Nangong and Ning, I feel like the protagonists are incompatible no matter where they go. (After reading the summary of the latest chapter, I want to give the author some thoughts after reading it. By the way, for those who like to read the comments before reading it, it should be a harem story. One of them is currently in a relationship, one of them feels that they are definitely in a relationship, and there are only two of them at the moment.)

Looks good, I hope Ning Qingqing is the number one heroine

Very good book

I'll give it four stars first. It's not a cool novel, but in comparison, it has a lot of true feelings. Personally, I think it's good. It doesn't have too many nested slaps in the face, but it actually lives in the present. The overall rhythm is relatively stable, but I feel that the main conflict and contradictory relationship should be the life and experience of the male protagonist, which can be a little clearer.

I want to see Qingqing use her actions to repair Gu Chen's heart again. The author, you are not a good person. I cried when I read the chapter when Qingqing came back to find Gu Chen. This is the first time I cried while reading a novel [crying]

There will be no paragraphs in the beginning, and there will be no sentence breaks in the back. Anyway, it looks uncomfortable

In my opinion, this is a book with a better look and feel, but it has too many settings and is too confusing to remember, and the update speed is a bit slow, but this is a common problem of the author, so this book is very good in my opinion.