Honkai: Star Rail: Jingliu’s One True Love

After all this time, this book has finally reached the beginning of its story. But that lone soul, defying time, has already created countless miracles: [The Gravity-Driven Sirius – Jingyuan] [The Merciful Fox – Baidu] [The Ghost Blade – Yinglang] [The Solitary King – Canggu] [The First King of the Universe's Insect Offspring – Taiziyuros]. Personally, I consider this the best fan fiction I've ever written. This is my 2200th rating!

I haven't seen such delicate writing in a long time. The characters are portrayed exquisitely, and the events are vividly described. Plus, as a fan of the Mirror Style, this book is truly wonderful for me. I'll still give it five stars. Although the writing style changed as I wrote, the overall writing is still very good. Here, I can only point out the author's current problems.

@NeighborXiaoXiu I believe you, author, wanted to write a good story. Your writing is delicate, your emotions are rich, and your initial intention was to create a standalone story. Writing fiction was to better portray the characters. Each story is excellent on its own, and I think the first one is particularly brilliant. However, could you please not be so detached in your emotions?

The Mirror Stream arc is a timeless classic. I'll probably never forget that five-star light cone—"The Sirius of Gravity Bow"—it truly was breathtaking. However, the Black Tower arc took a downturn, and I never read it again. But today, seeing it again on a book-shortage page, I feel I should give the author a belated five-star review, even though it might be a drop in the ocean compared to the…

It's truly a good read. The writing is top-notch, especially among Tomato's works. The descriptions are excellent, and the plot is very engaging. It feels like much of the writing is original, and the poems appear to be the author's own. There are moments of sharpness, but not poison. I like this kind of writing; it's very substantial.

Well, the writing is excellent, and the quality is very high, which is why I gave it five stars. I was reading diligently at first, but I got conflicted about the Jingliu arc later on. I didn't know whether to continue reading. I don't understand why the protagonist, who was so resolute at the beginning, suddenly accepted Yu Kong. He accepted, but what about Jingliu?

This is a novel with great potential, and I believe it will become a hit. The protagonist matures through repeated simulations, and although the process may be bumpy, the ending will surely be beautiful, just like the question: what kind of ending is worthy of all the hardships along the way? Why is the rating so low when it's so well-written?

A highly recommended, excellent fanfiction based on a simulation. The single female lead tag has been removed. I'll give it five stars after confirming it's a multi-female lead series 🤦 Ambiguity will offend both sides; hopefully, the author will learn from this experience.

The tattoo is excellent, very delicate; to be honest, this is one of the best I've read among all the Honkai Impact 3rd fanfiction.

It's very well written. What shocked me was that it's currently July (I think it's July 27th), and I was able to deduce some of the plot (I only started reading in September). However, there are a few issues (in my opinion). The protagonist's emotional development felt a bit too sudden; it should have been developed more thoroughly (though considering Mirror Stream doesn't have much of a plot…