Honkai: Star Rail: Jingliu’s One True Love

Along the way, the book finally reaches the beginning of the plot. But that lonely soul that went against the times has created countless miracles [The gravitational-stretching Sirius—Jingyuan] [The fairy fox who saves the suffering - Baidu] [The ghost blade that fights injustice—Shadow Wolf] [The lonely king who protects the world——Canggu] [The First King of the Insects of the World——Taizyuros] Personally, this is the best fanfic I've ever written. The 2200th rating is provided by myself!

It's been a long time since I've seen such a delicate writing style. The characters are exquisitely drawn and the events are vividly described. Plus, I'm a mirror chef. This book is really exciting for me. I'll give it five stars. Although the taste has changed as it's written, the writing is indeed very good. I can only talk about the author's current problems here. First of all, it seems that the change from single to multiple is really very unpleasant. When I first started reading the Kagami-ryu chapter, I was really shocked. But later on, when I read the Sora chapter, I felt a bit ambiguous. If you want to change it now, you can only explain that this matter is simulated. After all, the first half still wrote about an experience he had in reality. If he wanted to get a single, he could only write through this point, but I guess readers who support singles will still feel uncomfortable for a while. Oops, folks, the author has changed the introduction. Those who want to read a single female protagonist shouldn't have to think about it (just read the first 19 chapters)

@ Next door I believe that you, the author, want to write a good story, with delicate writing style and rich emotions. Your original intention is to go solo, and you write mock-up prose to better express the characters. Every single article is considered top-notch, and I think the first one is particularly stunning. But can you stop being so emotionally indifferent, don't underestimate the power of time, and don't write paragraphs like "You are perfect to me, but in this life I met another perfect girl ahead of time." It seems that the protagonist is both frivolous and scumbag. I hope it can be seen and improved a little bit Advantages: The writing is good, the description of emotions is good, and many contents are consistent with the simple description background in the game (it is not particularly biased towards the original work, nor is it particularly similar to the original work). Especially the first Kage-ryu chapter, it is the best fan story (not just Star Iron) I have ever seen. Disadvantages: Too light on emotions (I think this is the main point, I will explain it later). It is clearly described so well in the first article. The protagonist has obviously changed the future, but in the changed future, he has not met Jingliu because he has changed his identity and body. If you can accept it because you are not in Luofu when you are a child, and if you grow up and know where Kagiri is in Luofu, but still don't meet because you didn't think about a proper meeting, you can still accept it. But at the wedding of the blade, the protagonist and Kagiri both attended, and the protagonist also saw it, but still just missed it. It even added a touch, and the article wrote: "You are perfect to me, but in this life I met another perfect girl ahead of time." A friendship of dozens of days (sublimated love) is better than the sublimated love of childhood sweethearts who have shared joys and sorrows for hundreds of years? This sentence has made it clear that Yu Kong, who has known each other for dozens of days, is better than Jingliu, who has been in love for hundreds of years. Don't take time for granted. Simulating a harem is normal and acceptable. But don't make the protagonist's emotions so weak and write them in a sleazy and loyal way. There are always people in the comment area who say that the protagonist has changed his physical identity and is afraid that Kage-ryu will not be able to recognize him. However, at the end of the Kage-ryu chapter, the protagonist said in his last words that he would appear with a new appearance many years later, and only Kage-ryu knew that the arrow was not the manifestation of the imperial bow, but the work of Kage-yuan. Planting the seeds no matter what is a secret that only two people know. Why the protagonist suddenly helped Xianzhou is only known by Jingliu and the dead master. In the end, only the protagonist Jingliu and the two of them know the reason for leaving the sea of ​​flowers on the star. So much, not enough? After all, one cannot pretend to be the other. To be honest, at the end of the Kagami-ryu arc, I was preparing to see you again in the next life. Why was the next life so boring? It's a pity that the comment is too late

It's really good-looking. The writing style in Tomato is top-notch, the descriptions are spot-on, and the plot is very good. I feel like many of them were created by the author himself. The poems that appear seem to be written by the author himself. There are knives but not poison. I like this kind of writing. It's very substantial. It feels like I've been reading it for a long time, but when I look at the table of contents, I feel it's still far from the 70th chapter. It's substantial. I discovered this book at around 12 o'clock last night, and stayed up until 2:30 to finish reading the Mirror Chapter. It broke my habit of going to bed before 12 or 30 a. M. Since the summer vacation. It was worth staying up late. It seemed pretty good-looking at first, but then it was just a bunch of useless descriptions. Although it was pretty gorgeous, it was meaningless. I felt like I wasn't following the main line for a long time while watching it. It's a bit boring and there's not much to see. I just skipped through it and it soon became boring.

The Kyōryu arc is an eternal classic. I may never forget the five-star light cone - "Sirius of the Gravity Expansion Bow" in my life. Really, I was shocked, but then the Black Tower arc started to go downhill. After that, I never read this book again, but I saw this book again in Shu Huang Plaza today. I feel that I should still give the author a belated five-star praise, although the overall rating of this book may be a drop in the bucket. In terms of writing, the author's strength cannot be said. In terms of plot, the Mirror Style Chapter and the Silver Wolf Chapter are both chapters where I feel I can become a god, and the Black Tower Chapter is also an average-to-upper-level Tomato chapter. All in all, it's worth a read. If you want to wait and see, you can read the Kyōryū chapter first and then decide whether to stay if it suits your taste [laughs][laughs]

What can I say? The writing is very good and the quality is very high. This is the reason why I gave it five stars. At the beginning, I was reading it carefully, but after the Jingliu chapter, I was very confused and didn't know whether to continue reading. I was a little confused why the protagonist who was still determined at the beginning suddenly accepted Yukong later. He accepted it. What is Jingliu? He chased Kageryu for so long, experienced so much with Kageryu, and finally told Kageryu the truth and asked Kageryu to wait for him for hundreds of years... I don't know the author's thoughts, but from my perspective, writing it this way, the protagonist's love is too cheap, or it may be my own problem. I really can't stand it, but I want to see what Kageryu and the protagonist will do in the future, ugh😔 After thinking about it, I'll give it 4 stars. Alas, I thought I had finally found a good book, but I found it was not what I wanted to read😔

It is a novel with great potential. I believe it will be popular. The protagonist moves towards maturity through simulation after simulation. The process may be bumpy, but the ending will be beautiful. Just like this sentence, what kind of ending is worthy of the bumps along the way? The writing is so good, why is the rating so low?

An excellent simulation of a fanfic, highly recommended The single heroine label has been removed. I'll add it to the five-star bar after it's confirmed that there are multiple heroines [face covering] Ambiguity will offend both sides. I hope the author learns his lesson.

The tattoos are very good and very delicate. To be honest, this is one of the best Bengtie fanfics I have read.

The writing is very good. What shocked me is that it is now in July (7.27 Seems to be), and some plots have been deduced (I only watched it in September), but there are some problems (self-feeling). What about the emotional setting of the protagonist? It feels a bit too sudden. In fact, more words should be spent on it. Describe it (but considering that there is actually no plot in Mirror Stream, and the character description is not very good) and then there is the description of the black tower (what is going on, I can't understand it anymore, maybe it is my own understanding that is wrong) is the destruction of the planet written by the protagonist? Or was it written by Heita? And then why was Black Tower kicked out of the academy? It seems to be written by Heita, but the explanation given is that it was written by the protagonist. I can't understand it. I hope someone can explain it to me. Finally, I hope the author can continue writing. This is one of the few books I have finished reading.