As the Protagonist's Younger Brother, I Risk My Life to Push Her Main Story Forward

Hmm... How to put it, even if you score 9 points, you can get a good work, and if you get 6 points, you can produce a good work. The writing is good, the logic is smooth, and the author who dares to write a completely imaginary world in Tomato is also commendable. The character creation is very good in the chapters I have read so far, and the plot connection is not bad. Although it is not as good as those very good works, it can definitely be called a good work. The real rating in my mind is four points, but Tomato is more extreme, so it's five stars. No matter how many times I feel that the scoring mechanism is too outrageous. Anyway, come on. We look forward to your stories.

It's not bad. I really don't understand the feeling of familiarity I feel after reading this book. The memory picture only feels familiar twice. It can also be called memory fragment. After all, there is only one picture. In real dreams, novels and news will appear, and the reality is that the holiday is predicted. The memory fragment of familiarity is really relieved, but it is very strange. In the memory fragment, I remember that someone has come and the seat is in the order. In reality, it did come, but the location is different from the memory fragment. I still haven't figured it out [Exploration] I don't know how many days it took to finish reading it. Just look at the time! ?

It's very interesting. I hope the male and female protagonists have a good ending [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

I just like this kind of plot, and the author's writing style is also good, at least he's not a novice, and so far there are no poisonous points, and the author who generates electricity for love and loves to interact with readers is really cool.

At 11:44:13 am on August 24, YC2X51, in front of the Hongfei Tea House in Yongguang City, Xili, an existence named Lu Yanye completely disappeared from the world. At the same time, Lu Ye, who was lying on the back seat of the car, slowly opened his eyes.

Hmm... It's quite interesting, but I always feel that the male protagonist seems to have accepted the fusion of himself and Yuan Yanye (meaning that he is Yanye) but also feels like he is not Yanye. Also, does the male protagonist not want revenge for attacking the Lu family?

I really like this book so much (//∇//) Especially [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] during the day. It's so cute during the day\(//∇//)\The author must stick to it! ! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

The names between the characters are weird. It's like the Japanese who only know small courtesy but don't care much about it. They say the honorific with a smile and then fuck you with their hands. Of course, it is also possible that the author subconsciously felt that everyone was not a bad person when writing this novel. There are also character lunch boxes that I think are unnecessary, such as Qinglong, which is meaningless. The person who wrote this novel was really unambiguous when he said he would just send it. Spoilers involved, watch with caution. There are quite a lot of plots in Cyber ​​Reincarnation, with Xiaoxin and Xiaoxin as the male protagonists. When I saw the later stage, I was a little dazed, as if I had found the feeling of watching Sword fandom, Cyber ​​Eternal Life, immersed in the virtual world and so on. In fact, this is how we think about the definition of human life. When a person's body dies, you copy his memory and throw it into cyberspace. When the body dies, it is indeed physiological death, but a large part of a person's personality is made up of memory. You can't say that the person in cyberspace is not "I" at all. My opinion on this is that you have to believe it or not. After all, I have read a novel where the male and female protagonists are brother and sister, but the biological sister was killed by a bomb at the beginning, and then a laboratory creature read the male protagonist's impression of his sister and turned it into a "sister". The male protagonist later thought she was his sister, and I also thought she was, that's it. In fact, it is just my own subjective opinion, and this is the most important thing. It's a code, it's a triangle relationship, right? It ends in this way, which is good or bad. It's quite acceptable. All in all, thank you for the hospitality😊.

Although I haven't read it for long, I would like to celebrate the author's 365 days of continuous updates! This book is an original world view, which is quite difficult for the author, but there is nothing wrong with the first 60 chapters that I have read now. I don't quite understand why no one is watching it, it's obviously pretty good. Note: Tomato's scoring mechanism is quite complicated. The current low score is probably mainly because few people read it. It does not mean that the book is not good or that the reader's score is low. Friends who see this can add this book to their bookshelf or something, so that they can read it if they are in a book shortage in the future. After all, this book can be said to be in abundance now.

Give me five stars to encourage you. The subject matter is quite attractive, and the characters of the protagonists are also quite appealing. It can be seen that the author has written this book very carefully. However, there are some flaws in the plot, some passages are worded inappropriately, the writing style needs to be improved, and there are too many omissions... In short, the author has a lot of room for improvement. It is much better than those disgusting mindless articles. Good luck, author [like]