As the Protagonist's Younger Brother, I Risk My Life to Push Her Main Story Forward

Well... How to put it? A 9 out of 10 is great, and a 6 out of 10 can also be excellent. The writing is good, the logic is sound, and the author's courage to write in a completely fictional world is commendable. The character development is quite good in the chapters I've seen so far, and the plot flows well. While it may not be as outstanding as some of the best works, it's definitely a good one.

It's alright, but I really don't understand the sense of familiarity I'm experiencing while reading this book. There are only two memory scenes, and the familiarity occurs twice, so you could call it a memory fragment, since it's just a single scene. In reality, it appears in dreams, novels, and news, but in reality, it's a prediction of a holiday.

It's a great show, I hope the male and female leads have a happy ending 💕💕💕

I love this kind of plot. The author's writing style is also good; at least it's not amateurish. And so far, there haven't been any major flaws. Plus, it's so cool that the author works out of passion and enjoys interacting with readers.

At 11:44:13 AM on August 24, YC2X51, in front of the Hongfei Teahouse in Xili Yongguang City, the existence of a person named Lu Yanye completely disappeared from the world. At the same time, Lu Ye, who was lying in the back seat of the car, slowly opened her eyes.

Hmm... It's pretty good, but I always feel like the male lead is both accepting his fusion with Yuan Yan Ye (meaning he *is* Yan Ye) and not quite Yan Ye himself. Also, is the male lead someone who doesn't want to seek revenge against the Lu family?

I absolutely love this book! (//∇//) Especially the daytime scenes 😘😘 They're so cute! \(//∇//)\ Author, please keep going!! 😫😫😫😫

The way the characters address each other is odd; it's like the kind of polite but ultimately ruthless Japanese person who says something respectful with a smile but then doesn't hold back when they're about to get their hands dirty. Of course, it's also possible that the author subconsciously felt that none of the characters were actually bad people when writing this novel.

Although I haven't read it for very long, let's first celebrate the author's 365 consecutive days of updates! This book has an original world view, which must have been quite challenging for the author, but the first 60 chapters I've read so far haven't had any major flaws. I don't really understand why no one is reading it; it's clearly quite good. Note: Tomato's rating system is quite complex.

Please give it five stars as encouragement! The subject matter is quite appealing, and the main characters' personalities are also very relatable. It's clear the author put a lot of effort into writing this book. However, there are some flaws in the plot, some inappropriate word choices, the writing style needs improvement, and there are too many punctuation marks...