Ye Luoli: The Beginning of Trust

This book is the most amazing book I have read about Ye Luoli's fan fiction. Some fans said that the plot was incomprehensible and a bit confusing after reading it, but I didn't think so. This book revolves around two young men, Zui Junchen and Yan Mo. They go around in circles. After all, the broken mirror cannot be reunited. "The red string on the fingertips has dissipated. This time I will not haunt you anymore." Time and space are broken. Thousands of mirrors have been tossed around for thousands of years just to find one fate! After passing by each other 300 times in the previous life, only looking back in this life... Yan Mo regretted it after all. When Zui Junchen jumped off the bottomless cliff with despair, the outcome of the two of them could only be Be. A piece of sincere and enthusiastic love was exchanged for a person who didn't love him. He was the Lord of Faith. How could he not know that he was lying to himself? In the end, Yan Mo collapsed, and Zui Junchen waited for another person who loved him. Zui Chen also waited for a friend. When he arrived, he was no longer someone's substitute, and he was no longer alone! This article made me feel uneasy for a long time. Yan Mo's short sentence was like a sharp sword, deeply inserted into Zui Junchen's heart. Maybe he really regretted it, but things had already happened. Zui Junchen had already waited for Huo Liaoye, and Yan Mo could only regret it for the rest of his life!

My dear, I jumped to watch it and was confused. Who are the male protagonists＼(`Δ')/[face covering]

The plot is quite good and the concept is very fresh. Although I can understand what the author is writing, I still need to improve my writing skills! You can start from different angles and combine certain fragments, otherwise it will be a bit difficult to understand. It's a pity that it's unfinished, I hope the author can work hard! Learn to narrate a certain thing from different angles, integrate it, use more description, psychological description, or narration, and naturally explain the reasons why things happened. I hope the author's writing style will get better and better. (I originally wanted to give you 5 stars, but because you are a mess, I will hold you back) Come on! ! ! I hope your future works won't suck! !

I think it's okay. Based on what I know about the background, I should like it, but it seems a bit confusing and I don't understand it. Can any book friends help explain what the story is? [What]

The writing is really good and amazing, and the suspense set up makes people look forward to it. The corners of their mouths can't help but curl up, and they watch the film while listening to music. But I think there are some shortcomings, that is, the structure of the article is relatively messy, and the spatial perspective changes very quickly, as if it has been swallowed. When I read it, I felt inexplicable, and I went back to check to see if I had missed it. Each character's perspective is very long. I may be impatient. I prefer the third person perspective... Let me clear the mines for everyone [making faces]

The plot is really great. Although sometimes you can't understand it, right? But overall it's really good, and the character descriptions are also very good. I really like the character of the protagonist. This book is really beautiful. Highly recommended.

Yan Mo's ending is hard to reconcile with good intentions [punch hard][cry][cry]

I really hope Zui Junchen and Yan Mo can have a good ending😭

It looks good, but can you write a good novel for Yan Mo? Please T^TT^TT^TT^TT^TT^TT^TT^TT^T

The writing is okay, but I think the author can make some changes [I learned]