After transmigrating into the world of pirates, Xiu En is reborn as a Rust-Rust Fruit User.
“Is the Rust-Rust Fruit really a useless Devil Fruit?”
Xiu En has always believed that there are no useless Devil Fruits, only useless Devil Fruit Users.
What causes iron to rust? Oxidation: iron reacts with water and oxygen to produce iron oxide.
Oxidation is everywhere. Combustion and explosions are oxidation reactions; so is respiration in humans and animals. Decay and microbial decomposition are oxidation reactions, too. The Rust-Rust Fruit’s power is like a potent catalyst, accelerating the oxidation of whatever it affects by hundreds, thousands, or even tens of thousands of times. The result is something like time speeding up, causing anyone or anything struck by it to age or decay at an accelerated rate.
When Xiu En appears in the New World with his awakened Rust-Rust Fruit, Blackbeard immediately abandons his hunt for every other Devil Fruit User and fixates on Xiu En like a madman.
Let’s see how Xiu En uses his wits and Devil Fruit powers to make his mark in the world of pirates.
Wearing a navy uniform but doing nothing, he's practically ready to join a pirate crew.
The protagonist, a disciple of Zephyr, doesn't know who to ask for martial arts instruction and only thinks of Garp. Why doesn't the protagonist go to Zephyr or someone else who is also a disciple of Zephyr? It's much more convenient than asking Garp.
The timeline is wrong. Luffy only spent a little over three months from setting sail to the Marineford War. Author, you wrote that he caused a ruckus at Enies Lobby and then arrived at Thriller Bark two months later. Are you kidding me?
Nice, looks good
Aside from a few typos and a confusing timeline, everything else is alright.
The protagonist could become a magic swordsman like Brook; let's clarify the timeline.