In the World of Hokage, One Hit Is All It Takes

Author, do you know why your rating is low? Haha, it's because you did too much YY and analysis. I fell asleep while listening to the novel today, but when I woke up, the plot didn't advance much [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Sometimes a chapter is just one or two sentences said by the characters, and the rest is unnecessary to read. I guess many people skipped to read it [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I hope the author will not YY and analyze himself, and push the plot well. I still think it is quite interesting, come on. . .

The subject matter is great, the structure is rich, and the system is perfect. The description of the system is perfect. The mastery of abilities and power levels is okay, but sitting there in the first person is too much. If you write it in parentheses, it feels good to me, but if you stuff it in, it's uncomfortable. The rhythm level is enough, but I don't like your way of expression. It feels like someone is trespassing in the comment area. Be more pure and less yy.

My personal evaluation of this novel is pretty good. I feel that the character of the protagonist is very stable, the personality is still maintained, and the combat power has basically not collapsed. I feel that the combat power of Naruto novels is still prone to problems. The level of combat power does not match, the gap is too large, or the super model will greatly affect the perception. I believe that the creation of this kind of story must not only be consistent with the original work (you can have a lot of your own creations, but it must fit the content of the novel), but also consider the combat power. Overly dramatic descriptions of combat power can easily arouse readers' disgust. I have read a lot of Naruto novels, and the narrative level of this book is quite good. I give it a five-star rating and urge an update. [Smile]

I thought there were eight magical skills, but it turned out that I didn't even use the Golden Light Curse. I kept using ninjutsu. How could I be able to defeat one person!

I don't know why many fan authors have inherent malice towards Naruto, and even some readers feel that Naruto is nothing without the Nine-Tails, but Naruto's own chakra is 100 times that of Kakashi, an elite Jonin, and this does not count the Yang Nine-Tails chakra. According to statistics, Naruto's tactical literacy or combat IQ is also very high. 80% Of the famous tactics in Naruto are from Naruto. As long as Naruto is not over the top, he is the master of tactics in Naruto. Looking at Naruto, except for fighting Sasuke at the end of the early stage and looking for Sasuke at the beginning of Shippuden Apart from saving Gaara, Naruto rarely gets involved in battles. Whether he is fighting Haku and Zabuza in the early stage, or Neji and Gaara in the Chunin Exam, or fighting Nagato, Obito, Madara, and Kaguya in the back, Naruto is always able to hide his calm heart of looking for a fighter in the hot-blooded appearance. In these battles, Naruto has shown superb performance. The tactical ability that can be called "ninja combat". If Naruto didn't have the Kyuubi, he would be an extremely powerful ninja relying only on his own tactical qualities, chakra volume and perfect senjutsu. In contrast, if Sasuke didn't have the Sharingan, emmmm, I don't think he would survive long enough to compete with Naruto, so I still can't compare.

Overall, this is the most comfortable Naruto book on Tomato, but two chapters a day is a bit too little.

A very good book

The characterization is great, but there are too few updates, and it is not enough to make it exciting. Please write the protagonist as much as possible. The supporting characters can just have a scene. It is not necessary to write dozens of pictures specifically to describe it, right?

The plot is exciting and the logic is reasonable. I look forward to other books by the author. Good looking, non-toxic

Very good, the writing is very nonsensical. Very interesting. There is a kind of movie that I am watching, Stephen Chow. But there is no such joy and sorrow. There is only one kind of fun.