In the World of Hokage, One Hit Is All It Takes
人在火影一人一下
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.6M Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Other names
- Transmigrate into the Ninja World: I'm Here to Become the Dao Ancestor穿越忍界：我可是来当道祖的Alternate title on Fanqie
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Author, do you know why your rating is low? Haha, it's because you indulge in too much wishful thinking and analysis. I fell asleep listening to the novel today, and when I woke up, the plot hadn't progressed at all! 😂😂😂 Sometimes a chapter only has one or two lines spoken by a character; the rest is unnecessary. I guess many people skip around while reading.
The subject matter is good, the structure is rich, and the system is well-developed. The description of the system is excellent. The control of the power levels is also acceptable. However, there's too much first-person narration and wishful thinking. Even if you put it in parentheses, it's easier to read, but forcing it in is jarring.
Personally, I think this novel is pretty good. The protagonist's personality is quite stable, his character design is well-maintained, and his combat power is generally consistent. I feel that the power levels in Naruto novels are prone to problems. Inconsistent power levels, large gaps, or overpowered characters can severely impact the reading experience.
I thought they had the Eight Extraordinary Techniques, but they didn't even use the Golden Light Mantra. They just used ninjutsu the whole time. What's with this "Under One Person" thing?
I don't know why so many fanfiction authors seem to have an innate malice towards Naruto, and even some readers do, thinking that Naruto is nothing without the Nine-Tails. But Naruto's chakra is 100 times that of Kakashi, an elite Jonin, and that's not even counting the Yang Nine-Tails' chakra. Naruto's tactical acumen, or rather, his battle intelligence, is also very high.
Overall, this is the most comfortable Naruto manga to read on Tomato, but two chapters a day is a bit too few.
A very good book
The character portrayals are great, but there are too few updates and not enough exciting moments. Please focus on writing about the main characters as much as possible. The supporting characters can just appear briefly. It's unnecessary to write dozens of chapters specifically to describe them.
The plot is exciting and logically sound; I look forward to the author's other books. Good-looking and non-toxic
Excellent, the writing style is very nonsensical. Very interesting. It feels like watching a Stephen Chow movie, but without the dramatic highs and lows. Just pure fun.