Superpowers: I Have Twelve Formless Bamboo Slips

It seems pretty good now. The previous paragraph about raising Xia Qing and Zhi Yuan was a little bit poisonous and would dissuade some people, and the characters appearing now are basically female. Of course, these are secondary. The main reason is that the title of your book is not bright. If I hadn't been short of books, I would not have had the desire to enter this book when I saw this title, but all in all it is still good. Come on, author! Come on! Looking forward to future exciting content

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The first part was okay, but Xia Qing's part was really poisonous. I lacked the crystal core and it was still useful, so that I could become a spiritual person, but I used a lot of it on a person who didn't have a deep relationship with me. I didn't have such a big feeling when I used it on my sister who was in school. . .

Now it feels like the progress is too fast. Does Apocalypse even know the background of the protagonist? What's so special about a talking companion? The Great Sage didn't remind him, so the phaseless letter should not have been exposed. It should be that the companion spirit that was born to talk has something special and has its own divine status? Well, now that the pictureless slips have been exposed and only the protagonist doesn't know about it, I'm really convinced!

Generally speaking, I can't stand it after reading a few chapters. The plot is too slow. This is not called slow-burning. Some chapters are even more like nonsense. The plot doesn't move at all after one chapter. I don't know what happens next. Anyway, I can't stand the first chapter at all. For example, the chapter where the mother and daughter are sent away and then go home. It doesn't matter even if a whole chapter is deleted. The impact on the plot is minimal. Obviously this matter can be solved in a few sentences. Don't use slow-burning as an excuse.

The current performance in the book and the author's statement are confusing to me. If you only have one heroine and then you have so many women, it's hard not to imagine whether the author has cheated or been cheated on in real life. If you want to have a harem, you have to have an open and honest harem or just stick to one heroine to the end. It's okay to have a few more female friends, but the whole beauty is a bit annoying. Damn it, if you are a friend, you should act like a friend. You kidnapped the mother and daughter. You told me that you had no idea about them, so I had to give you both a hard time. There are also the two in Haoran City. For now, if you say that they have no idea about the male protagonist, I don't believe it. In the future, you will either accept them all or die or put aside the relationship. How is it different from being irresponsible for hanging on others? I can't stand this kind of person the most, the kind of novel that picks up a lot of stories and only chooses one. I see every one of them spraying

It's okay to read, but the part about mother and daughter could be done in a different way. It's too fast to raise them directly. Although they share hardships, they don't necessarily have much real affection. It can be said to be "temporary stay". Promote feelings through gratitude. Otherwise it feels very poisonous

Come on, the author, I haven't found a book with a great fighting style for a long time. I fight when I have to fight, and the daily writing is very beautiful. When will I transform into a wolf-eared girl [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], and the snow dumpling, cute, I can write more about the snow dumpling and the white wolf. Come on, author.

Both the battle plot and the emotional line are very good. This kind of slowly developing emotions is rare and rare. , "[][][][][]

Come on, it's okay for now