You Chose the Blonde, So I Walked Away. Why Are You Crying?
你选择黄毛，我退出了你哭什么
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 295k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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Reader comments 12
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The licking dog counterattacks all the way and makes a comeback. The regret of the school beauty makes the plot full of emotions. The system setting is the confidence for the protagonist to counterattack. It is exciting but not just exciting. The plot is compact and attractive. It is a very good article!
"High School Awakening to the System, School Beauty Begs Me Not to Leave" uses "system flow" as a shell to wrap up the core of campus emotions and counterattack growth. The protagonist Lu Miao went from being rejected by the school beauty Ji Tianling to counterattacking and becoming stronger after awakening the system. The plot twist is extremely impactful. The ability improvement brought by the system coexists with the refreshing feeling of "counterattack and slap in the face". Multiple heroine settings increase the emotional level. The plot updated in the past 7 days remains fresh, suitable for long-term follow-up!
Counterattack and slap in the face is always the most exciting plot! The male protagonist goes from being a humble "dog licker" to awakening to being a cheater, and his turnaround journey along the way is very enjoyable to watch. The choices and regrets of school beauty Ji Tianling add to the drama and conflict. The opening pace is fast, the system settings are straightforward, and the writing is well configured. I look forward to the follow-up exciting plot of the male protagonist rising all the way and multiple female protagonists appearing!
The transformation of school beauty Ji Tianling from arrogant rejection to collapse and regret is the biggest emotional breaking point in this book. When describing her psychological gap (such as "sobbing" and "questioning"), the author renders it well, allowing readers to enter the male protagonist's perspective and feel the pleasure of "you were indifferent to me at first, but now I make it impossible for you to reach".
This article is amazing! The protagonist Lu Miao's transformation from humble courtship to awakening and counterattack is very touching. Faced with Ji Tianling's turning back, he took a firm stance and let out a bad breath. The plot is compact and eye-catching, vividly showing the sweetness and sourness of love and growth. I love you so much!
The writing is not bad, keep writing 🤭
To be honest, I don't know what this book is about. As for relationships, there aren't many emotional entanglements. They feel like normal friends.
This urban fantasy novel is based on "dog-licking awakening + system counterattack", creating a sense of freshness in a clichéd framework. The protagonist, Lu Miao, has been feeding dogs affectionately for several years. After being stung by Ji Tianling's words "you are just licking dogs", he relies on "the most nb system in the universe" to tear apart his humble character. The humiliation in the first half and the thrill of fighting back in the later stage form a strong tension. The details of Ji Tianling's sobs when he wants to get back together make the line "Don't cry if you choose yellow hair" both relieve his anger and poke the emotional pain point of "unable to calm down". The system flow + the setting of multiple female protagonists broaden the narrative dimension: the "becoming stronger" given by the system is not only an upgrade in combat power, but also a transformation of mentality; if other female character branches can be explored in depth, the urban group portrait will be more vivid. The current writing style is straightforward with a "shuangwen-style irritability", which is suitable for readers who like to watch "waste counterattacks in the face" and "sobering up after mispaying love". They can touch the hidden thread of "self-respect and self-love" in the fast-paced and refreshing atmosphere - after all, only by quitting the wrong can you rush to the right. This bowl of counterattack chicken soup has spicy and refreshing condiments.
It should be almost done, but let me say something else, well, the author's writing style is quite good, and the reading is smooth, but some of the logic is not rigorous. Secondly, the emotional line is not clearly written, the protagonist's goal is quite vague, and why the system came, this point is not written. Overall the plot is quite good. It's not considered the general public, it's not considered a niche, it's clear that it's a protagonist, and the heroine will grow old together.
The writing style is smooth and delicate, the story is wonderful, the plot is full of ups and downs, the wife, the wife, the wife is so beautiful, I highly recommend it.