Growing from the Mud

The author's writing style is very good, and the writing is eloquent, which makes people want to read on. But I have two suggestions that I hope the author can use as a reference. First, who is our protagonist? After reading three chapters and changing several perspectives, I don't know whether it's the show or the couple. But on the other hand, if you look at the beginning of the story with an infant, there is almost no child's perspective. Secondly, this is a historical article, with some modern vocabulary popping up from time to time, which can make readers a little confused. In summary, this is just my personal suggestion. Just read it. Besides, I am also learning to write, so I can't help but express my opinion. Finally, I wish the author's work a hit and more than 10,000 updates per day!

It's super exciting and beautiful.

It is very realistic in terms of human nature. How can I put it? The first half of the heroine's life was too rough, as if she was unlucky wherever she went. But in reality, accidents and tomorrows really don't know which one comes first. I think maybe I would like the heroine to be beautiful alone without CP. Later, the emotional line with the forensic doctor came a bit suddenly, because the relationship between the heroine and Xu Yi was described too much in the early stage. I felt a little pity when they separated later. I remember the medical examiner said that Xu Yi always had a superiority complex when getting along with the heroine. When the author described their relationship with each other, I didn't feel Xu Yi's superiority. Instead, I remembered the opening description of Xu Yi who disagreed with others and said bad things about the heroine. He looked like a gentleman. Of course, it's possible that I didn't read the article carefully and didn't see the details.

The first 80 was very good, very good, very good, very good. It was a more real world than a river of sadness. But when the heroine went abroad and was kidnapped by gangsters, I felt so disconnected and turned into fantasy.

I like it very much

That sense of powerlessness and unfair fate of hard work always makes me feel that Shen Chenyu died that summer and went to welcome a new future with her mother. Later, Tan's redemption was really too late, not enough to last for Shen to go abroad. Especially later, there were almost no twists and turns in the relationship between Tan and Shen. It felt like a dream, very unreal.

When I saw the middle part, I wanted to give it up. The sufferings that followed were often for untenable reasons. It felt like suffering for the sake of suffering and suffering for the sake of torture. But I still finished reading it because I wanted to know the ending. In the end, I lamented that the author's intention was just to hope that the sisters who read this book would never give up on themselves because of the hardships they have experienced in life. No one can be trusted and only self-love and self-improvement can be relied upon. I think of the hot Jia Ling movie I watched not long ago. Maybe repeated failures and unfairness make people helpless and desperate, but you must never give up on yourself. Strengthen yourself little by little until you can stand in the same arena as your opponent and fight with all your strength. Then you will find that even if you lose, you have become a very good version of yourself.

Like it very much! Regardless of the length of the novel, it is comfortable to read it immediately, which shows that the author knows how to tell stories. I really like the "love words" the male protagonist said to Xiao Chenyu: Don't use others as a non-standard ruler to measure your own shortcomings. You are you, you happen to be where I like you, you don't need to be better, you don't need to be better, you just need to be yourself! Let's encourage each other! ! Come on, Laoyan, I look forward to your better works.

After reading it, it was very interesting. The writing is very smooth, but the details and plot in the book could be improved. The only point that made me cry was when Xiao Chenyu got married and what my grandfather said when he caught up with her. It's really good to cry. It seems that I have returned to the scene of choosing one of three. The despair and helplessness I felt at the moment of being abandoned were finally relieved after many years. There are always relatives who love Xiaoyu. I was moved by the family in the book and also because after Xiaoyu went through so much suffering, she met someone who respected her and loved her. He makes me happy, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers. [Adoration]

Qin is a foreshadowing. There are countless variables in Xiaoyu's growth path. The love of her adoptive mother is the only pure thing she has. Uncle, aunt, grandpa, Xu, their love is all sugar-coated cannonballs. Understand the small fish and become a stone. Super pretty and awesome