Miss, Stop Whaling! I'm the One Person You Can't Have

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It's really good, but it's 100 million points short and slow to update. Another point is that the hero's mother's character and behavior are quite poisonous. I can't believe that the hero is her biological child. If the male protagonist's character and actions were changed, this book would definitely get a nine-point rating.

Everything else is good, except that the mother's character is a bit weak. If the author writes a refreshing article, I suggest removing the mother, so that more readers will be willing to read it. By the way, it's very artistic and feels like a great teacher. You can write a special novel about youth pain that is neither a harem nor a harem, and add the mother into it. This way you can redeem the incomplete family, and the audience is not people who read harem novels. Maybe the quality of the book will be better.

He still can't forget his love for social issues and contradictions. I cry to death. The number of words is still enough. I originally wanted to support it, but unfortunately I couldn't help it and was afraid of dying. The routines are old and new, and the strategy has changed from being conquered to being conquered, but it is still the same. It feels like a harem is quite difficult to open. It's impossible to accept them all. After all, the background is reality. I'm afraid it's a fake harem. I don't know how it will end. (How about the male protagonist ending up alone✿✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿) The author really likes to write about family conflicts. There are two books in them (I didn't read the first one, so I don't know if it's there or not. I'll add U ´꓃ ` U later)

I've read the first two books, and they were both pretty good. I just didn't expect this one to have multiple female protagonists. But as an omnivorous bookworm, I don't have any objections to one, two, or more.

It's very realistic, but also very sci-fi. The introduction said it was lighthearted and funny, and I admit it is true, but the reality is more overwhelming and made me feel complicated. My advice here is... Don't read it as a cool article, it won't make you feel happy.

The writing style is okay, I can't say how good it is, but it's not awkward. If you read it normally, there's no problem. The plot setting is also good, but some plots are too fast. Although it's reasonable, it still doesn't take the readers into consideration. There are also some unreasonable feelings. The protagonist's feelings in the last second are still extremely annoying. The next second I was kissed, there was no reaction at all. Anonuo's emotional line was too fast. I had just become a tutor, and I was kissed not long ago and there was no reaction at all (there may be something wrong with what I said here, because the protagonist and An had done it in the system). There are no other problems. It's a good book.

Why is the rating so low? It is recommended to change the plot of the protagonist's mother. Most people in the comment area quit here.

In fact, as far as Shuangwen is concerned, giving Bingtang a chance and letting the male protagonist listen to his father's words are considered poisonous points. But on the other hand, thinking about it, people's moods, thoughts, and behaviors are uncertain, and they are not solely good or evil. People are contradictory, so that we can see some people doing things they don't like everywhere. What the author wrote is exactly true. Having said that, I came to read the refreshing article, so I still feel uncomfortable [laughing]

It's a pretty good seedling, because the family author created it so well and vividly described the ugliness of the hateful stepfather and son, making it a target for readers. Also, it's too little, hurry up, I can't sleep at night😭