Miss, Stop Whaling! I'm the One Person You Can't Have

Hehehe, number one 🥺🥺

It's really quite good, but the updates are a bit short and slow. Another point is that the male lead's mother's personality and actions are a major flaw; I can hardly believe the male lead is her biological son. If the male protagonist's mother's personality and actions were changed, this book would definitely score nine points.

Everything else is good, except the mother's character is portrayed as a bit weak. If the author wants to write a wish-fulfillment story, I suggest removing the mother; that would likely attract more readers. Incidentally, it has a very artistic feel, reminiscent of the style of Da Zhangwei.

He still can't forget his love for social problems and conflicts, I'm heartbroken. The word count is sufficient. I originally intended to let it grow a bit longer, but I couldn't resist and was afraid it would die out. The plot is old but with a fresh twist, shifting from a strategy guide to being the one being conquered, but it's still the same old formula.

I finished reading the first two books, and they were both pretty good. I just didn't expect this one to have multiple female protagonists. But as an omnivorous bookworm, I don't have any opinion on single, double, or multiple female protagonists.

It's very realistic, and also a bit sci-fi. The synopsis says it's lighthearted and funny, and I admit there are some moments of humor, but the realistic themes are much deeper, leaving me with mixed feelings. My advice is... Don't read it as a lighthearted, entertaining read; you won't find it enjoyable.

The writing style is alright, not amazing, but not awkward either. It's readable normally. The plot is also good, but some scenes move too fast. While reasonable, they don't quite consider the reader's perspective. There are also some illogical emotions; the protagonist can be extremely disgusted one second and then kissed without any reaction.

Why is the rating so low? I suggest revising the storyline involving the protagonist's mother. Most people in the comments section quit here.

In terms of a wish-fulfillment novel, giving the main character a chance, and the male lead's mother making him obey his father, are definitely flaws. However, on the other hand, people's feelings, thoughts, and actions are unpredictable; they aren't simply good or evil. Humans are contradictory, which is why we often see people doing things they don't like.

It's a promising new work, but the author did an excellent job portraying the family dynamics, vividly depicting the despicable stepfather and son, making them the target of widespread condemnation. Also, it's too short; please hurry, I can't sleep at night 😭