But whenever anyone asked them about their sect, they always claimed it was a small, nameless sect. Yet all sorts of signs showed that they were anything but nameless... everything proved they were no ordinary little sect.
Personally, I have a general understanding of what I have written so far, and I have summarized the following points: First, the theme of the story makes me shine in an era where systematic literature is everywhere. After all, I have not seen such urban writing for a long time. Based on this alone, I have given the author a high score for this work; second, from the current point of view, the biggest loss point of this book is the lack of description of the environment. The environment is the first to set off the characters. Two details, if the description of the environment can be more detailed, then the characters will be more vivid and the story will become fuller; third, there are no particularly big flaws in the plot, and the overall look is relatively perfect, the rhythm is slow, not compact, and not sparse. I hope the author will keep it like this and make slight modifications on this basis. I believe it will get better and better in the future [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]
A very interesting article with novel subject matter that makes people's eyes bright. I would like to add one sentence to describe it, that is, what seems to be an unknown little teaching is actually an abyss. The rich writing style, wonderful storyline, and exquisite character portrayal are definitely worth recommending. [Like] [Like] [Like] I am looking forward to the subsequent updates. Don't stop updating, give me the momentum to update 10,000 words a day.
The content of the novel is still readable, the plot is relatively compact, and the description of the characters is relatively simple. However, the description of the environment needs to be strengthened, and the inner description of the characters needs to be improved. Expect better and better.
So well written! Anyway, I feel much better than what I wrote.
The writing is smooth and the characters are vivid. It is a very good novel. I look forward to the follow-up development [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
Personally, I have a general understanding of what I have written so far, and I have summarized the following points: First, the theme of the story makes me shine in an era where systematic literature is everywhere. After all, I have not seen such urban writing for a long time. Based on this alone, I have given the author a high score for this work; second, from the current point of view, the biggest loss point of this book is the lack of description of the environment. The environment is the first to set off the characters. Two details, if the description of the environment can be more detailed, then the characters will be more vivid and the story will become fuller; third, there are no particularly big flaws in the plot, and the overall look is relatively perfect, the rhythm is slow, not compact, and not sparse. I hope the author will keep it like this and make slight modifications on this basis. I believe it will get better and better in the future [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]
A very interesting article with novel subject matter that makes people's eyes bright. I would like to add one sentence to describe it, that is, what seems to be an unknown little teaching is actually an abyss. The rich writing style, wonderful storyline, and exquisite character portrayal are definitely worth recommending. [Like] [Like] [Like] I am looking forward to the subsequent updates. Don't stop updating, give me the momentum to update 10,000 words a day.
The content of the novel is still readable, the plot is relatively compact, and the description of the characters is relatively simple. However, the description of the environment needs to be strengthened, and the inner description of the characters needs to be improved. Expect better and better.
So well written! Anyway, I feel much better than what I wrote.
The writing is smooth and the characters are vivid. It is a very good novel. I look forward to the follow-up development [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]