[Naruto] Who Dug Up My Grave?!

What should I say? After reading it in a day, it can be said that it is not a direct torture that makes you eat a knife, but a dense pain after careful tasting. Yiguang was too miserable. He couldn't influence the opinions of Madara and Hashirama. He could only watch their backs getting further and further away. He was silent, silently accepting his own ending. "Are you going to abandon me?" Yiguang still opened his mouth while looking at Madara's leaving back. What was he thinking at that time? What were you thinking when you later learned that your mother had been killed by your father? What was he thinking about when his father married someone else? I don't know, maybe only Yiguang himself knows that he can do nothing but wait silently for the end of his death. Perhaps, at the moment of death, he finally gained freedom and finally left the courtyard that trapped him in his short life. Mu is an unexpected child. Her birth represents the death of her mother. Will she be curious about who her mother is, having never seen her mother? Will she feel sad when someone says she is a disgrace to Uchiha Izuna? Yes. What were you thinking when you were killed by your own father? Will you despair? The girl's father represents the ocean. Does sleeping in the ocean represent returning to her father's arms, just like her father held her when she was born? Finally, when will Chieko die? I hope everyone is happy, or that Yi Guang can really get some sleep.

To be honest, it's quite beautiful, and the writing is also very good, but it's really convoluted. My brain is about to explode. The writing is really, really good, so good that I can't understand it [crying]

The setting and writing are pretty good, but the timeline is so confusing_(:з∠) It feels like a lot of things are not explained clearly, and the endings of many people are not explained. It feels like a collection of short stories inspired by imagination, because the same settings are put together. The perspective change and the span of time and space are very large, but they are not specified through clear descriptions. Both Yiguang and Mu are full of contradictions and tragedies, both in their origins and in their growth. The stories between them and their parents and between them and Him, the grudges between Uchiha and Senju, the confrontation between Konoha, the family and individual ninjas, the story of the code in the future, why he came back to help Yiguang and Mu. There is also the main storyline of Naruto saving his mother and the source of grudges (p_q) The stories that can be extended and told are very rich, and I feel that there are still many things that can be written. The writing is really great (//∇//) I hope there will be additional chapters to supplement it. Looking forward to the author's new book (⑉°з°)-♡

Not bad, not bad. The author is very bold and dares to think. I was shocked three times when I read this novel! ! ! But this book uses humorous sentences to make my heart ache. It's not the death of a person, it's the kind of heartache that makes people feel sad, but it's a helpless tragedy. Truly moved from the heart, not just a beheaded knife between yin and yang. At the same time, I still want to say one more thing. The author has a good idea. I never thought that fan fiction would have such a setting. There may be one or two pairs in other fan fiction. You have really put together all the clichés. It's amazing!

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I like it very much. It's very interesting. Goodbye to those who don't understand this book.

Ninjas are people who know joy and sorrow. This sentence is really good. How many tragedies have been caused by instrumentalist ideas? Yiguang, a child of light, was trapped in darkness. The cherry blossoms in the courtyard never bloomed until her death. Mu, is the daughter of the sea, buried in the sea. In the end, did she hate her father's indifference, or was she already numb? What is a ninja? This article cannot be read purely as a CP article, because it exposes ugliness more than warmth and is more redemptive than love. My child, are you truly at peace? The author is good at using the camera and switching techniques, which is suitable for handwriting, movies, or short stories, but for novels, too many techniques will appear a bit confusing. But I understand. Also, the characters are complex and the emotions are the same. Sometimes if you don't understand them well, you will be letting the author down a lot.

Ah, it's beautiful. The description of the three members of the family together before Hashirama was separated really gave me a very warm feeling. In the end, Madara was killed by Hashirama (although it was a fake death), and Yiguang and Hashirama had a quarrel. When Yiguang died, it reminded me of why we came together. It's a pity that time can't go back to that warm time.

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was a cookie. . Look back, huh? Why does your cake (chew chew) look so weird (bleeding from the corner of your mouth)? After watching it, I was very energized. I couldn't sleep much and was a little bit upset [I almost cried]

Very good! ! If the author wants to write an extra chapter in the future! ! I would like to ask the author if he can write about the main world in the future, which is the four battles in the main storyline of Naruto that we are watching now [which is the plot of the original Naruto anime] [Thinking] Watching the movie Now, the author, what is the plot in this book? During the Fourth World War, we watched the plot of Yi Guang and Mu's world together [heartfelt] I think the author portrayed the psychology of Yi Guang and Mu very well! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] So can I write this extra? [Top post][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] I really love this book! ! ! ! !