Standing Beyond the Heavens

It's not bad, but it feels like the countries in the book only take things from the protagonist and use him, without giving anything in return. Things aren't like they used to be, but they're not exactly like they used to be either. It's like Confucius saying that Zilu redeemed people; in today's world, it's like a country finally developing a very advanced technology and then asking you to teach a few people for free. Who would be willing to do that if it continued like this?

It was good, but with so many female leads, goodbye 🤮

At the beginning, he said he went home to live in seclusion, but then he took a detour and went to teach others martial arts and swordsmanship.

It's supposed to be about cultivating immortality, but they've turned it into martial arts. If you're going to write about martial arts, just write about it properly. Why include so many women and the country? Sigh.

If you can't write romance, don't bother; it's awkward to read.

Good, author, keep it up!

It's quite good. It's a unique martial arts story set in the city, with a sense of spiritual energy revival. However, the cheat system is rather sudden, unlike simulations where whatever you need appears unexpectedly, and the power increase is also quite abrupt.

It's well written, keep it up!