The Host Goes Straight for the Target, and He Falls for Them Again and Again

It's beautiful, thank you to the author!

It's very good. At first I felt that the ending of the first and second worlds was a bit rushed, but later I found out that there were additions at the end. The characters of both the attacking and the receiving characters are very good, there is not much entanglement, they are all going in both directions, there will be no conflicts due to various elements, the plot is not draggy, and the pace is a bit fast, but it does not affect the reading. In the last few worlds, the love line and the career line intersect, so you won't get tired of reading it. The book is very interesting, but the score is a bit low, but it will come up soon.

I came here for the main 1 emotional line, but it's really not clear what the upper level is and what the lower level is. Then there is the emotion. I can feel Shou slowly falling in love with Gong, but Gong seems to have this feeling disappearing from time to time. I don't understand. There's also the squad leader's plane. Logically speaking, the development shouldn't be like this, but it's still inexplicable. This plane feels like the plot is quite cumbersome. Come on, it's good

Nice! Very much to my liking! Come on!

It's okay, but the world line link is a bit fast, and some of the story preparations are not completely written. The last world is not bad and has a feeling of sublimation. Generally speaking, the pace is too fast and the content is rushed.

Super super super beautiful! ! ! Especially since I'm a group favorite in the gaming world! ! ! ! It's just that the author's update is too slow. Although it will be tiring if there are too many, but as long as you are tired, you have to update until you die.

Do the two protagonists attack and suffer separately?

I didn't read any more after reading the article "Cultivation of Immortality". It's okay. I'll give you a quick review. The emotional line is very light and very light, almost non-existent. I thought it was because I wasn't familiar with the previous worlds. But I found that I'm halfway through it [currently working on the manuscript] and it's still very bland. The whole article is very bland [currently working on the manuscript]. Sisters who like plain things can read it.

Well, it's not bad, it's good-looking and not bad [eating melon] But it's too clear water, oh my, it's almost the finale, so I gave some minced meat for the finale, it's a bit [punch]

Not sad. There are many plot lines and few emotional lines. It is relatively bland. Each world ends suddenly. The small world often starts at the end of the chapter. It is a bit confusing to watch. I will make up the extras later. I have almost forgotten the plot of the small world, especially the world of Xueshen. At that time, I was very curious about how they got together. I only saw the extras after the finale.