I, Uma Musume, Don't Believe in Luck

The male protagonist, ah, no, the female protagonist is very strong, ridiculously strong. Only the three goddesses can make the female protagonist feel like losing. But the heroine's character is too gentle, even soft He would even deliberately slow down in order not to discourage the horse girl behind him. But the heroine felt uncomfortable several times because of the incident. There are also the skills and values of the protagonist, which are all based on the Jockey Girl mobile game. Those who have played the Jockey Girl mobile game may be more accepting of it. Those who have not played it may feel that it is a bit of a Riddler at first, but as it continues to unfold, they will gradually understand it. Damn it, you didn't even write it in your profile. Why did everything go smoothly later on and then it turned into an infinite flow and ended up inside the spirit of Shizai? I don't like unlimited streaming, it's a minefield for me Goodbye, we are destined to meet again

I love it so much, I love it so much, come on, I want to see Shura Field [Love] It depends on whether the protagonist pokes the emperor or gets poked [love]

It's quite good-looking, and one of the few Ma Niang stories on Tomato. But, it's really uncomfortable without double quotation marks. Also, I wish there were more daily routines and more detailed descriptions of the competition. Come on, don't keep updating [Like][Like][Like]

The writing is very good. The format of the article has a fragmented beauty. The expression of the article needs to be practiced a little more. (For example, some details of the characters can be more detailed, so as to make it more immersive.) The content of the article is very good, (but it is a bit dull to read, but it is not dull if you read it carefully). The language of the article is like broken gems, which makes people feel distressed, but you do write well. Don't get me wrong, I just feel sorry for your expression, and your content is really good... Well, in short, the story you want to tell readers is quite exciting, but your article is really weak, (Diaijia, pass)

I hope to see the day when the protagonist's pelvis is broken soon [shy]

It's very similar to the horse racing girl's cool article. It's very interesting and I like it. But the author, can you help Urala? After all, they all have the same factor. For example, just give Urala the carrots that improve attributes like in the special week. I want to see Urala win a few times, even if it's OP, G3 and G2. [Cry]

It's not bad. I hope the protagonist can be tougher and worry about this all the time. It's very unpleasant to watch.

9 Out of 10 beautiful

To be honest, except for those who have never played Yu-Gi-Oh and can't understand the part about Yu-Gi-Oh, most of them can be said to be interesting, and this is most likely the first Jockey Musume fanfic that I have finished. And when I first read this book, I felt a little embarrassed. I seemed to have read this book in 23 years ago, but I had not read Jockey King at that time.

It's pretty good, the plot is more to your liking Because your punctuation problem is worth eight points. This is the remaining three points.