After Becoming the Male Leads' Love Rival

I don't remember when I started watching it. I just remember that it was a long time ago. During the process of watching, I found that Bai Yi was a very cute and stupid person. Later, I found that he was an absolutely rational person. He didn't stop for anyone. That was the original intention of doing the task. Why is the task also called a task? It's because it's over after completing the task. I've read other articles where I fell in love with the person I was tasked with, or fell in love with. I don't know why, but I came here to do the task, but I was fascinated by love. I like the heartthrob very much, but I like the real heartthrob, the person who is loved by tens of thousands of people, unconditional love at first sight. I love him with tolerance, understanding and gentleness. This is the love in my eyes. Even if it contains deception, it is the kind that doesn't matter. The plot is also very reasonable, with unforgettable love, the original intention of doing the task, the reason and determination not to stop for anyone. I believe he will go further, just as he originally thought.

It doesn't matter, I will give myself five stars As for the male protagonist, he is just an ordinary social animal, his IQ is limited to the level of ordinary people, and he is also straight-forward, so sometimes there are some things that he cannot understand, and what he cannot understand is based on the level of a normal man, who usually cares more about girls, and some of Xiaobai's choices, such as He would not offend the Holy Mother when it comes to bad people, but he would choose to save someone who is a good and innocent person. In the small world, he performs this task according to the character of the original protagonist, so the character of the male protagonist is not strange at all, and don't say that he has no brains. After all, how high can the IQ of ordinary people be. Whether it is np or no CP, it mainly depends on which one you like, and then I will write it in that direction. Don't think about 1v1, it is impossible to write it in this life. There is also the question of whether there is meat or not, I will write it if you want. No matter what world he is in, there is no deputy CP. Xiaobai is very popular with handsome guys, but not girls, so he is destined to get entangled with many handsome guys. The last thing is that I am really not lazy, really not!

Let me explain in advance that the author's writing style is very good, I just give some appropriate suggestions. To be honest, sometimes the article will read better with a little more privacy and mystery. For example, you can mix the genders of Li Nan, such as he, it, and she, to increase the sense of mystery, make readers interested in reading, enhance the feeling, and attract readers. Generally speaking, if it is too simple, it is easy to guess, and usually there are no people. Also, in the first world, the love of the boss is ridiculous. I guess you may have had an inspiration, no, it was just a sudden inspiration that you just pasted on. There is a feeling that the preface does not match the postscript. It is recommended not to do this. It is best to use extras, because the post does not have to be smooth. You can modify it and add some settings and things, or the title should be separated from the main text. In this case, the reader will not look very comfortable. Also, this system feels weird to me. Well, maybe it's a foreshadowing, right? , I'm not sure, I can't describe this feeling. Well, I remember there was one that was special and had a very strong feeling, but I didn't seem to bookmark it and forgot about it. I remember I should have commented: It feels weird, come on. I hope that the author's book can be read by more people, and I hope that the author will not misinterpret my meaning. I am really just making a simple suggestion, and I don't mean to slander it. I don't mean how I think your article should be changed, or what should be changed to something better. This kind of guidance to the world, I hope readers will understand clearly! The author must always see it clearly. , My mind is relatively fragile and I can't stand scolding, so don't use it! ! I think the writing style of this book is very good, but it has a few flaws. The only reason I made a suggestion was because of the author. If you don't listen, you don't have to change it. It would be better if you listen. My real intention is to make this book develop better, please don't scold me, thank you I repainted it. The first world is very nice, but only the front. The back is broken. It's completely jumpy. The writing is quite good.

It looks good. The two male protagonists can fight without cp, but it is a knife. Bai's duty is to travel through every world and act as cannon fodder to follow the plot. This duty must be completed. If you don't complete it, you will be punished. The introduction says that in the world he has experienced, the protagonist and the villain will like him. In this case, the plot It will collapse and Bai will be punished. If every world is like the author's introduction, Bai will be punished in every world. Every world has to be, it is a knife. Every world can be knocked, but every world has to be. Author, you are so cruel [cry][cry][cry] Can you update it quickly? ! ! ! ! Don't you have a holiday for National Day? [Crying] Why don't you update?

It's too short, and my writing skills need to be refined, so keep up the good work! These are some of my suggestions. If you agree with them, you can adopt them. Don't have too many Internet memes; the descriptions should be to the point and describe the essence of things; don't be too colloquial, which will make readers feel naive; you can read more classics. The level of online novels is not high. Reading classics is one of the main ways to improve your writing skills. Writing more articles, summarizing experiences, learning lessons, and listening to opinions are necessary stages to improve the quality of articles. Come on✊! Hope to see more excellent articles from you!

Come on, the content is so good. You must write it according to your own ideas. Don't be led astray by the comments. It's the first time I've seen something like this that I like.

This book is a good choice for bookworms who read a lot of brain-burning texts. Refreshing, direct, the world collapsed, he really dared to die. He has a charming physique, and that's not just a boast. He likes it, he really likes it. It's just like this, the more you watch it, the more you get addicted to it. The setting is particularly interesting. If you just want to watch it and enjoy it, you can try it.

Not bad, is the author considering writing a follow-up? For example, a book I read, because the way to leave is death, each book has a be ending, but after the protagonist travels through more than ten or twenty dungeons, he returns to the first dungeon when he died or a period of time after his death to change the tragedy and change the ending of the dungeon to he to fill the regret. I feel that the author's book that favors heartthrobs is particularly suitable for this kind of book⭐⭐

Gone? Gone? ! Just gone? Woohoo, update soon [crying][crying][crying]

The protagonist is a pure straight man who will not become shy because of falling in love. I used to particularly like the kind of smiling tiger who is strong and always smiling, and the gentle and gentle Leng Qingfeng. It hit me hard. I love watching it, but every world is too short and the protagonist dies too early. Oh my God, the protagonist dies at will. I was stunned when I first watched the first world.