I Found Her After She Was Bullied

It's so beautiful. The author's writing is good. Maybe it's progressing too fast. The outline (should there be one?) Is set towards the back. Otherwise, the writing may be more poetic. The sweet and greasy feeling is already there. The main thing is when to get rid of the annoying supporting characters. I understand that it is to promote some main plots, maybe after the confession, or after some main plot? Just less of it. The link of saving the beauty is easy to use, but if you use it too much, you will feel a little tired. Finally, I finally found the sour feeling again. Although the book I read before was a bit different from this subject, it was very touching! ! !

Overall, it's super sweet, and the second half of the book is very touching. However, the switching of different perspectives and some changes will make it hard to understand for a while. The characters are quite vivid, with flesh and blood. The plot design is a little uncomfortable at the end. It seems too abrupt and omits some key points. The overall impression is not bad. , The main theme is about love, expressing mutual care, consideration, taking care of each other's feelings, respecting each other, slowly cultivating feelings, and guarding a love for a lifetime. Love transforms into love, which transcends appearance and material things. In the current era when love is like fast food, it is extremely rare and valuable. In addition, the plots that attract people's imagination can be less... In short, when will the author arrange a rainy summer for me?

It's so sweet, it's been cured, it's great, please keep it up, "Santa Claus, it turns out to be bread-flavored."

The previous writing is very good. Although it is a cliché plot, it is unique through the switch between first person and third person. The creation of the male and female protagonists is very successful, and the two-way redemption is very heartwarming. But I felt that the sociophobic man and the two non-mainstream junior high school classmates were a failure. The characterization of the sociophobic man was too deliberate and unnatural. The appearance of the two junior high school classmates was also very unexpected. It's pretty good in other aspects. As a new author, it's already very good. In terms of story line, the author needs to improve, so give him five stars for encouragement.

When I first read it, I actually didn't feel very good, because the progress in the beginning was very fast, and the plot of taking it home directly didn't seem reasonable to me. At that time, I thought this book might not be able to bear it, but I tolerated it a little bit later, and after reading the back part, I found that the author has made progress in the whole book. The writing is very green, but the emotion is very good. Some of the psychological feelings made me feel depressed, and I felt the sincere love between the two protagonists. I give it a full score of 9.5. The shortcoming is the beginning, but I still give it five stars.

It's super nice and the characters' emotional descriptions are also very delicate. The only thing that made me uncomfortable was the quarrel. The quarrel between the heroine and the hero when they went home for the Chinese New Year was not very good. After all, it was the first time I went there (no malice). However, the writing is still very beautiful. The writing is very positive in the three views of men and women. Overall, it is very beautiful. By the way, can the author write more chapters? Two chapters a day is a lot! ! ! [Grievance] [grievance]

This book directly meets all my requirements, no quarrels, no breakups, no misunderstandings, no frustrations, no green tea, no procrastination, no obstacles, the journey is sweet to the end [Love][Love][Love][Love]

If I comment based on my preferences, this is a very good work, very sweet, I hope you can continue writing, (mainly because I don't like to comment, unless I like it very much, I like this work), so keep up the good work and look after you [Like]

I think it is very well written. I have heard so many novels and I think this one is my favorite. It is ordinary with a little surprise. The title is always eye-catching and makes me guess wrong. I also fantasize about living this kind of life... This kind of novel has an inexplicable sense of substitution. It writes about the identities of the rich lady and the young master. Most people only write about this kind of thing when they get home (which makes the heroine feel surprised 😲), but the author did not write it like this. It's just a bit short and not enough to read. I haven't finished it yet. I've only reached chapter 100. The author continues to work hard (why does this novel not have a multi-person dialogue function? It makes me uncomfortable at work). The author has released a new book. Tell me that I have decided to become your biggest fan.

It is very well written. This is undoubtedly one of the best novels I have read. The little match seller has countless tragedies. She meets Santa Claus who only belongs to her on that rainy night. It feels very healing. The only drawback is that there is no daily life between the two of them after marriage. It is a bit regretful. Santa Claus really tastes like bread.