
A Secret Love Poem in the Dust
尘埃里的暗恋诗
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- Modern Romance
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- Youth Sweet Romance
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This is a novel that will make people feel sad and warm after reading it late at night. It is not so much a story about secret love as it is a mirror that reflects the youth that each of us may have experienced, struggling between inferiority and self-esteem. 🌟Truth is its sharpest stroke "Adapted from a true story" is not a frivolous label. Starting from the first sentence, "Xia Changjun hated Zhou Xubai when he was a child," the author tears away the sugar-coating of many campus stories. The subtle discrimination due to one's origin, and the stubbornness of "the more one is looked down upon, the more one has to resist" are all too real. This is not a suspended fairy tale of "the top student and the school idol", but a real record of a girl's life who tried her best to bloom flowers in the dust. Her counterattack has no golden fingers, only desperate ferocity, which allows every reader who has ever fought for fate to see his own shadow in her. 👥Character creation: Reject flat "affectionate" The most surprising thing is the author's treatment of the male protagonist. Zhou Xubai is not the perfect male protagonist who "only shines for the heroine from the beginning" in the traditional sense. He has the limitations of his origin, his growth trajectory, and even some kind of "central air-conditioning" unconscious injury in his early days. As the author said in his PS, his views and feelings gradually matured - this made the whole story break away from the cliché of "love tool", and made the two-way ending more weighty, more like two real people slowly getting closer and seeing each other clearly over time. 💔 "Mild abuse" is just right The limitation of the heroine's perspective in the early stage is precisely the most exquisite design of this novel. Like Xia Changjun, we can only see his superficial aura and the prosperity around him, but not his silent gaze. The entanglement of "I hate you because I'm afraid I love you" and the feeling of inferiority that instantly returns to its original shape in front of the person you like are portrayed in detail. This is not abuse for the sake of abuse, but the most common and secret pain of youthful secret love - we have all clumsily hidden our feelings. 📖A growth narrative beyond love Although it is labeled as "secret love", at its core it is a growth story about class, self-esteem and self-realization. Xia Changjun's line of struggle is clear and powerful, and her value never depends on love. This gives the entire story a stronger skeleton and wider resonance. Whether you are born in the 80s, 90s or 00s, you can find a certain moment of your youth in it - the sensitivity about your origin, the confusion about the future, and the strong desire to "prove yourself". ✨The final touch When the story reveals the trump card of a two-way secret love, all the early sourness turns into sweetness. It turns out that in those years of parallel time, they were on their own tracks, silently deviating for each other. This design is neither bloody nor obtrusive, only a kind of fateful tenderness - it turns out that we have not been ignored, it turns out that the other side has seen those silent battles. This is a book that needs to be read calmly. Its writing style is as delicate as a sketch, and the original texture of youth is outlined stroke by stroke. If you have ever secretly liked someone, if you have ever used anger to cover up your vulnerability, if you believe that love is not about saving but illuminating each other - then this book may be the unfinished poem from adolescence that you have been looking for. Recommended to anyone who has bloomed in the dust.
I have read about 100 chapters so far. This novel is really good. I came across it on the homepage at first. I felt that the name was very special. It was different from the exaggerated names of other Tomato novels. I clicked on it with a simple and warm feeling. The author's writing style is very sophisticated and does not look like a newcomer. He especially likes the description of Chang Jun's psychology in his childhood. It has the flavor of children's literature. People who have had the same experience will definitely have deep feelings. When they see the thought-provoking places written, they often take screenshots while reading. The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is also well shaped. With a kind of sour and sweetness unique to adolescence, I am very much looking forward to their subsequent development. For us spectators, youth has passed, and we hope that baby Changjun can get the life she wants in her own youth. Maybe it's because the author writes based on his own personal experience. The words written with emotion are very moving, and they are not piled up with gorgeous words, which makes people feel very comfortable. Looking forward to more future works from the author.
Some books are like a mirror, reflecting your thoughts that have been hidden for a long time. This novel is about secret love, and it's so real - so real that it's shocking. Those moments when he was hesitant to speak, his pretended casual eyes, and his instinct to find him at a glance in the crowd were all accurately captured by the author, as if they were pulled directly from memory. The most powerful thing is that it does not glorify secret love or describe it as youth frost, but honestly presents the sweet and painful pull: you hope he will see it, but you are afraid that he will see it; you want to get close, but you are afraid that if you get too close, your dream will be broken. "That was a glimmer of "possibility" that she had been looking forward to for so many years..." (Corresponding to Chapter 62 of the original text, the author also has many such beautiful lyrics) After reading this, my heart suddenly shrank - it turns out that so many people in the world, like me, have quietly burned themselves out in unknown corners. If you have ever had a crush, this book will remind you of someone's eyes and that summer you didn't dare to say. (Is he)
A very nice novel! It really suits my taste! The author's narrative and character descriptions are particularly touching. I couldn't help but shed tears for the little Changjun in the book... After reading those delicate words, the Changjun in the book seemed to have walked in front of me - that stubborn and brave girl; Changjun. There is still a long road ahead. Please put yourself in the water and fire thousands of times! Unknown reader (PS: The author updates frequently!) This book is really well written! I also had a crush in my ignorant adolescence, so the descriptions of secret love in the article are so real [crying], it makes me feel like I was in the third grade of junior high school when I tried my best to have more interactions with him. At that time, half of my full diary was about him. I would be happy for a long time if I had a little relationship with him! This book really made me feel deeply. I miss the Sundays when I didn't read and the year I can't forget; The sadness of secret love, the beauty of youth, the difficulty and perseverance of a girl's growth... The countless beautiful moments in this book really remind me of the unique echo of youth... Changjun, mom is not the only one who sheds tears when you mention your growth. Changjun, I wish you Zhengzheng, I wish you high spirits
It's good-looking. I really like the heroine. Although I personally dislike Changjun and Qining, the official partner is Xiaobai. But if you think about it, it's very simple why Xiaobai is the official partner. The heroine's restraint will naturally be attracted to Xiaobai's positive and cheerful character, just like a naughty person needs a lover who can't be driven away. Qi Ning is not the official match, maybe because they are too similar. The two are too similar, the same kind, but unfortunately they can only be friends and not lovers. Oh, now it seems that Changjun is still young, so there is nothing wrong with it. I just want to see how Changjun improves his living space and moves towards a better life step by step. The girls in the book are actually not single-minded and like the cannon fodder role of the male protagonist. They are also flesh and blood (I want to see the mutual understanding and help between women)
Hahaha. It's so cool. I haven't seen this kind of painful growth-type campus story for a long time. The author's psychological description is really on point. The sensitive inferiority and longing of adolescent girls, as well as this ambiguous atmosphere, make people feel itchy. Reading the introduction and beginning, I felt it was a very childish campus novel. I read the comments and saw no bad reviews, so I convinced myself to read on. And now, after staying up all night, my life is miserable. Why is it serialized? Tomato, why are you pushing serialization for me? [Crying][crying][crying] Not enough. The author [crys] [crys] more every day. The writing style is also excellent. The description of the scenery in the book is very capable. Delicate and soft. The plot is very realistic. Every obstacle the heroine encounters, standing in the background of that era, makes her feel helpless. You are so brave, stubborn, and kind, baby girl, I really like you [almost crying] [almost crying] Regarding the controversy over the male protagonist, they were really on the same page at first, but Xiaobai and Changjun felt so right about each other. Update quickly, update quickly [I'm about to cry][Cry] This score is also the reason why I didn't dare to approach it at first. Tomato's books casually scored 9 points, and there were only a few good ones above 9 points. So seeing a 7-point story makes me question his quality even more. However, the author still conquered me with his delicate writing style. Update quickly Update quickly [Blow kiss]
The author really writes it very well and very realistically! 🥰🥰🥰Chang Jun is a little girl who has been working hard. She defended her dignity with actions when faced with verbal insults from snobbish teachers. When faced with bullies, she resisted without hesitation and persisted in studying. Although she had some low self-esteem due to the influence of her teachers in the early stage. But later on, he still corrected his mentality and was positive [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. Although Zhou Xubai was a bit like a central air conditioner in the early stage, isn't it the time to play with peers at a young age? Children may not have this awareness and think that they are all peers and can play together, but in the later stage When I realized that I liked Changjun, I really avoided a lot of suspicion, maybe because I realized it, but Xiaobai is also a very, very, very good person. When everyone is under the influence of the snobby teacher and playing with country people, he will take the initiative to pay attention to Changjun, and will also help Changjun when she is bullied. Anyway, both of them are very, very, very good people [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] The author's writing style is really super good 👌🏻 The fresh and natural descriptions are delicate and vivid, making the characters and scenes come alive on the paper. The deep meaning is hidden in the simplicity. The author is great, come on with the writing! I hope the articles will get better and better and more people will read them👀
I really like this book! I stayed up for several days to finish reading it. At first, I just saw a clip performed by a blogger, and I was attracted to read the original work. It is really beautiful! The writing is very touching. After reading one picture, I couldn't help but keep reading. I couldn't stop and read whenever I had free time. The relationship between Changjun and Xiaobai is really young and beautiful. This is a grand love that is almost as long as life. Changjun is such a strong, persevering and brave girl. She is really great. She understands what she wants and strives desperately to transform from the bottom to the top. She is so amazing that she can endure hardships that others cannot. She is very sober and rational. Although she likes Xu Bai very much, she cares more about her own future. Xu Bai is like a little sun. Such a two-way secret love is really sweet, so pure and touching. The sour inner monologue of Changjun above really touched my heart. This is what a girl wants. From now on, my girlish worry is to become as good a person as Changjun. Among the others, I like Qining the best. Qining is like a god. His grades are so good and he has a cool feeling. When Changjun was bullied, he was the first to bravely stand up to protect her. He would help her when she was troubled and help her make up classes for free. He is really a good person. Next is Yaoyao. Yaoyao is also like a little sun. Although she was affected by Teacher Dai's words at first, she changed her mind after Changjun rescued her. She was Changjun's first good friend of the opposite sex. He warmed her up for a long time and always took her to chat. Even though she knew Changjun and Xubai were together, she was not angry. She understood her and wished her well. Yaoyao's mother is also a very good person. "A child can risk her own life to save others. How bad can she be?" This sentence really surprised me. There are also many other classmates who have become very good as they grow up. Such group portraits are really touching. Each supporting character has his or her own shining point. The story line is very delicate. When I watched the ending yesterday, I felt extremely reluctant to say goodbye to them. After watching it, I felt as if they had really existed by my side. I hope they can be happy in the parallel world. I am not that interested in novels. This one is an exception. I will read it many times. I hope this book will be a big hit! Looking forward to the physical book! I will definitely buy it!
This is the best campus novel I have read recently. Not only the protagonist, but also the supporting characters have very delicate emotions. If you read carefully, you will find that everyone has a shining personality and is polite to others. Zhou Xubai, who is measured and wise, Qi Ning, who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, is determined, Lian Yaoyao is innocent and domineering, Zhao Mingjuan, who seems innocent but has plans for the future, Lu Xiaotong and even Yang Qin, they are all thriving from elementary school to junior high school and beyond. Among them, my favorite is Changjun and Danyue. Changjun has low self-esteem but is not negative. From elementary school to now, Changjun is growing up all the time, and she has become extremely determined. As a rural girl, Danyue is luckier than Changjun, because she discovered her shining point earlier than Changjun. Even if the male protagonist may not like her, she has become extremely good. I hope she can persevere. Every female character in the author's works is very sincere and lovely. They may sometimes whisper secretly, sometimes be jealous of some boys, sometimes be happy and sometimes have low self-esteem. I think this is very normal, because youth is like this. At the same time, while reading, I really enjoyed the details of the exchanges between the heroine and the hero. Under the author's excellent writing style, their psychological descriptions are also very accurate. I like it! ! ! ! ! !
I want to write a lot but don't know where to start, but this is the best novel I have read recently. The writing is very delicate, as if you are actually in it. Many plots in the story are very real. The snobbish teacher, the gossipy neighbor, the naughty and confused children, the kind cousin, the tired parents... Every character has flesh and blood, and is not just a tool to promote the plot. You can see some shadows of the student days in some characters, as if you have returned to the student days. Really pretty! I admire the heroine's perseverance, self-discipline, and bravery, from ignorance to courage to fight, awakening, awkwardness, and low self-esteem. You can see the growth and inner changes of each character. Everyone is not perfect, nor should they be. People are complex and changeable. Thanks to the author for giving the hero and heroine a happy ending. Although unsatisfactory results are common in real life, I still feel happy to see them happy in this small world. Maybe this is the power of words!