Football: Starting with Hamburger SV

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Take a look at it first, there are some flaws, but it is tolerant to novices and new books. How should I put it, there are still too many off the court. Mainly watching football, not too much commercial stuff. Although these are unavoidable in the lives of professional players, these things can be downplayed in the novel, and one or two strokes can be skipped... Maybe it is due to different cognitions. The author's understanding of football is still a little different from mine... Third review change To be honest, I don't really want to watch it. How can a 16-year-old have such strength not to be pulled into slices [face covering] Your 16-year-old body simply can't handle this...

It's okay. There's just a lot off the field, but it doesn't matter. Just write more about football. And there's the picture above that you mentioned, author. Without a picture, I'd really go crazy. I don't know what the pig's feet are doing every time.

What I wrote before is good, of course there are points for deductions, that is Nazha For the same reason, I can't stand those pictures.

It's great that the national team is in Croatia. I like The Magic Flute in the midfield [Adoration]

Can anyone tell me if this is a sports and football story or an urban love story?

It's really good to read, especially the novel based on Azar. It's the first time I read it.

If you want to write a good football article, you must grasp the emotional scenes and off-field situations, which is not possible at the moment.

Can there be less off-field factors? If this is what the plot requires, just pretend I didn't say it

Not bad. It would be nice to have a few more foreign stars, models, and beauties.