Football: Starting with Hamburger SV

(╥╯╰╥)ง Dear kind people. Can I have one of the three free gifts every day? (P′‵.)

Take a look; there are some flaws, but I'm forgiving of beginners and new books. Well, there's just too much off-field stuff. I mainly watch football and don't want to see too much commercial stuff. Although these things are unavoidable in the lives of professional players, in novels these things can be touched upon lightly, just briefly mentioned...

It's alright, there's a lot of off-field stuff, but it's okay, just keep writing about football. Also, author, where are the pictures you mentioned? I'll go crazy if there aren't any; I never know what the main character is doing.

The rest of the text is good, but there are some points that need to be deducted, namely Nazha. For the same reason, I just couldn't stand looking at those pictures.

It's great that the national team has qualified for Croatia, and I love Modric in midfield 🥰

Can someone tell me if this is a sports/football story or an urban romance story?

It's really good, especially the novel based on Hazard; it's the first time I've read one.

To write a good football story, you must handle the emotional scenes and off-field aspects well; currently, that's not possible.

Can we reduce the number of off-field factors? If this is necessary for the plot, then disregard what I said.

It would be great if there were a few more foreign celebrities, models, and beauties.