Survive in the Ark, and You'll Evolve

Currently one of the best Ark stories written by Tomato (better ones are basically eunuchs). As a newbie who has played PC games for 1,200 hours and mobile games for three years, I would like to give some suggestions to the author (only my personal opinion) 1. The first few chapters have created the images of Tuotuo and Li Hongying well, but the protagonists feel not three-dimensional enough. We can write a larger chapter about the growth of the protagonists. 2. The rhythm bar feels that some places are a bit slow and some are too fast, such as artifacts. Chapter 40 or 50 should still be the novice protection period and go directly to the mine. Personally, I think it should be mainly developed, but I am speaking based on the game and the urine of Ark players. This should be very boring. 3. You can add more conflicts, such as conflicts between the protagonists, interference from wild dragons or tribes, or encountering some heavy blows. You can combine it with the first point. After all, only through suffering can you grow better. 4. It's a bit too old-school. The author's description of fighting scenes may not be very good. After all, he doesn't write much about it. The battle scenes could be more shocking and igniting. 5. I hope this is a big book with a thousand chapters. After all, Tomato doesn't have many Ark stories. This book is really good. I hope it can stay with me for a while longer. 6. Come on, author, the baton of the Ark novel has been passed to your hands, please take the Ark world with you, make it bigger and stronger, and create greater glory [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Well, after more than half a year, the author's writing has improved a lot. But, why is it that the battle scenes are described so vividly and realistically, and all kinds of words are piled up, but it just can't ignite? [Thinking]

God among Gods, Ark's current pinnacle work, the plot flow is not delayed, the human relationships are real, the characters are all flesh and blood, and the plot is explosive. It's really amazing that Ark, a semi-original novel, can be written so well. I even stayed up all night to read it.

It's very interesting. I've been a bookworm for nearly 2,000 hours here. It's really interesting and very real. Some comments say that the man in the mangrove tribe, the green turtle, is just an ordinary person, not the protagonist. Go ahead and kill him directly. This is from God's perspective. The author writes very well. Everyone has their own character. Come on, I support you. That city-traveling book can't compare with this one. It's the pinnacle of the Ark novel.

The writing is good, but sometimes it is prone to high blood pressure, but it is reasonable. I have read some books about the Ark, but the writing is really not to my taste. After reading this book by the author, I was instantly satisfied. It may be a bit exaggerated, but I really like it very much. [Sending my heart] I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future. [Please update] PS: I prefer the process of growing up. I hope the author will stop writing too much and turning it into a brainless and cool article [face covering]. By the way, Tuotuo is really cute [licking screen]. He is responsible for my laughter.

Come on, author, this book is really the best Ark fanfic I have ever seen in Tomato. I don't really like the invincible style, so this book just suits my taste, and the setting is also very close to reality. It's not a game, it's about survival, so it's nice to not have a space backpack and instant release of things, just like the real Ark story. I hope the author can persevere. The writing is very good. Although the updates are slow, I think it's worth the time for quality!

The writing is so great that I can't help but comment again. The characteristics and personalities of each character in the protagonist group are well described, and the plot development is also ups and downs, which makes people more and more like it. The only thing is that when the author names the characters, can they be more realistic? Every time I see Luo Li and Shota's names, I just want to laugh every now and then, and the sense of empathy that I finally accumulated is gone in an instant [laughing and crying]. Putting aside these things, the protagonist is constantly growing and becoming stronger. I love you so much, author. This is the best book I have read in the past few years. If you stop reading, I don't dare to think what I will become [crying] I haven't read this novel for a while. It's not that I don't like it, but I'm very interested in Ark. I got a computer and bought Ark. I just finished King Kong now. After all, it's a game for beginners. The author's writing is great.

I have read a lot of Ark books, and this one is considered to be at the fairy grass level among Ark books. In the early days, the golden finger was based on the understanding of the game and creating a prophetic advantage. After a period of development, I felt that I was far behind the people around me. Later, the daily writing was a bit boring. The author also gave a climax to the heroine's plot, which gradually fleshed out the two heroines who were slightly abrupt and dull in the early stage. Several small plot transitions increased the surprise value a lot, which is why I kept watching. At first, I thought it was just a pure Ark story, and then I pushed it without thinking all the way. As a result, some of the plots unexpectedly made me feel nervous for the protagonist. The author smoothly used the main theme of the dinosaurs in the early stage to shift the main plot to the confrontation between people and tribes. Although it is normal for most fantasy novels, there are still few who can change the style of writing so quickly in a novel like Ark. Most authors will be immersed in the main melody in the early stage, thus forming a routine, which makes old readers miserable. The author's ability to flexibly end the melody and introduce new foreshadowing is still very good. This is also the difference between this book and others. Advantages: Not brainless, the plot is rich and novel, the characters are carefully drawn, although it is a bit cliche but it is very acceptable. It can be seen that the author wrote very carefully.

It is not written in a game-like manner like other Ark novels. Instead, it is written very realistically and is full of details. It is not a verbal novel. The plot is very interesting and full of connotations. It does not seem to require a lot of brainpower, and it is very easy to read. It is recommended that everyone watch it. As of the latest chapter, there is no poisonous point. The only shortcoming is - the author of Xiba, are you writing too slowly? [Angry]

I read part of it in 2023 and felt that the writing was not good and there were many poisonous points, so I gave up the book. However, more than a year later, I read this book again. The poisonous points have been modified or deleted, and the overall plot has been polished. The protagonist is not absolutely righteous or evil. I still like this kind of gray painting style. Not everything can be diode. There are always some things in the world that cannot be perfect, but we can choose a better one. Overall, this is the best Ark novel I have ever seen.

It's awesome, the world view is amazing, and the description is very delicate. It has changed the Ark in my mind. I hope it will not stop at the official DLC. After the plot is completed, other mods can be opened.