Cultivating in Secret by the Side of a Powerful Woman

It's a bit like the story of a mortal cultivating immortality, but the plot with the heroine is very good, please do more [laughing]

The author is a newcomer, and the title of the book did attract readers in the early stage. However, as I read along, the plot and writing skills gradually became better. I give it a five-star review. I hope the author will work hard and not over-exaggerate or supervise. The more he writes, the more exciting it will be.

It's beautiful. I've never seen such a beautiful book. The logic is clear, the plot is compact, and the characters are vivid. The protagonists, villains, and supporting characters all have brains. Every sentence is worth reading carefully. It's not watery at all. [Chigua]

It's pretty good, there's not too much emotion that's boring, nor too little that's all. There is a female supporting role, but the male protagonist also knows how to keep his distance. The speed of cultivation promotion is quite reasonable. The fighting ability is also unbelievable. [Like] I take back my previous comment, the male protagonist is also an ambiguous person, and he is very annoying. Sentimental and ruthless, the more you look at it later, the more you pull it.

The story is exciting and the plot is compact. No matter the main or supporting characters, they all have their own characteristics. I hope it will be updated three to five times a day. The male protagonist's personality traits are a perfect match for the female protagonist, but the upgrade is slow now. The more I watch, the more exciting it becomes. The storyline has ups and downs, and the writing is smooth and vivid without dragging. [Like][Like][Like]

It's very interesting. Great author. Come on! I wait for your updates every day! Hope there is no ambiguity, single female protagonist

I have seen more than 300 pictures so far. The overall quality is good and the quality is very good. My experience is almost the same as that paid by QD. However, there is a plot that has some sandbags. It may not be a problem in other ordinary novels, but the previous writing in this novel is so good that it is unacceptable. It's still a bit unacceptable. This plot really makes me have to quit after reading one chapter to calm down. I finally found a high-quality novel that suits my taste. I immersed myself in it, but suddenly it changed. It felt like it was forced. But I still support the author. After all, it is free, and it is not suitable for being forced to do anything.

This is one of the better novels I have seen. It describes the emotional sublimation process of the male and female protagonists from scratch, as well as the entanglements with other sects, without a running account. There are no boring, pale and irrelevant language dialogues or scoldings in order to make up for the word count. The more than 300 chapters so far are still to my personal satisfaction.

Update it quickly. It's written too slowly. This book is quite traditional about cultivating immortals. To be honest, the first dozens of chapters are not very well written. Maybe many people didn't stick to it. When it comes to becoming a god and ascending, I change the picture. I suggest the author change the title of the book and it might be better, so I give it four stars. Come and take a look, it's been a while, I've been chasing it for more than a year, keep up the good work in 2025. Alas, I found a good book

Although the score may be better on Tomato, there are not many ratings now, so I still give five stars to show my support and hope to continue writing it from beginning to end. The writing is good, and it is a cultivation article that can be used as food. The basic content of Mortal Flow is presented well, and the pacing is okay. The single female protagonist is my favorite, and the author's character creation is also very good. The emotional line of the single female protagonist is well-proportioned, which polishes the relatively dry cultivation plot. After all, it would be a bit uninspiring these days to just read a cultivation novel about Gou Dao cultivation. The height of the following book depends on whether the author can gradually lay out a larger story background. Most traditional cultivation novels like this do not do well in developing the story in the mid-term. Finally, I have a small wish. I hope that the male and female protagonists can complement each other and have a single female protagonist embedded in the main line, instead of being used as a pendant in the later stage for the male protagonist to cheat alone.