Immortal King, Please Hurry Back!

Overall, it's pretty good, but there are too many female characters around the protagonist. The female supporting characters appear at least several times more than the male supporting characters. What we want to see is the plot, not the women in the text. If we want to see the women, we might as well watch the video directly without reading the text. I feel that most of the supporting characters in Tomato's novels are women. To be honest, it would be better to have a more balanced look. In this way, isn't the novel originally designed to attract attention through the plot? When did it become the creation of female characters to attract traffic? This is my idea after reading the novel for eight years. This novel is quite good, but too many female characters can cause disgust.

The daily life of Pig's Feet is very rich. The main plot is hidden in the daily life. When encountering problems, you will kill decisively. There will be no villains appearing one after another. The plot of the young man calling the old man is not very interesting. I like the direction of the plot the most. The daily routine is very exciting. Once you get tired of watching the daily routine, the main plot will advance immediately.

1. Shuangwen 2. It is not a pure invincible story. The male protagonist has a weak performance, and it is not a true invincible story. 3. It's more everyday, the plot is humorous and relaxing If you only look at the above three points, this book is worth 9.2, And there is nothing wrong with it as a five-star masterpiece. Next, let's talk about deduction points. 1. Bad ending. This ending is really bad. This kind of thing is very demeaning. 2. Connect with the prehistoric system. Nowadays, fantasy novels on the Internet are a big poisonous point. If you just draw on classical mythology and develop a new writing method, it will be very good! Examples include: covering the sky, the realm of immortality, the supreme being of one life, and the supreme emperor. They all borrowed mythological allusions and wrote their own things. Didn't take the old road. 3. At the end of the period, the knife was fired too fiercely, causing death, madness, and sealing. The living were happy on the surface and sad on the inside. It does not fit the happy tone set in the early and middle stages of the book, which is a serious penalty point. Judging from the latter three points, this book is not worth a 9.2, Or even a 9. The rating should be around 8.6 If there are follow-up extras to complete, the rating of this book will increase further. It's a pity that there won't be any anymore, and the author will write a new book to fill the gap. Books of the same type are highly recommended 1. "The Counterattack System Awakens Only in the Mahayana Stage" is really invincible, the plot is humorous, the male protagonist is not exhausted or injured at all, and the ending is not bad. 2. "What to Do If You Suddenly Become an Immortal", the whole book is humorous, but the finishing stage is rushed and has many flaws.

The protagonist is completely invincible, unlike other novels where he is a piece of trash who just swallows his humiliation and is stepped on by others. All the protagonists and supporting characters are vividly written, and their daily life is very warm. You can't help but smile at the corners of your mouth. If you have a good imagination, you can fill in the pictures with your mind, and it feels like you are watching an anime [please update]

A good book, more to my liking. I recommend everyone to read it.

An interesting invincible novel.

It's so funny. A different urban fairy king article. I also wrote a book. Can anyone give me some advice?

It's very interesting, the character control is very good, the plot is simple and easy to understand, and the writing style is humorous. I personally think it's fine for a score of 9.5 Or above.

A good invincible article, the content and characters are well connected. I hope there will be no harem later, otherwise I can just declare lazy tail.

To sum up, I have finished reading it now. Generally speaking, there is nothing to say about the poisonous points in the early stage. All the turning points are after Li Mingyue found her biological parents. This is a big turning point. From here on, Li Mingyue basically disappears and is replaced by Li Mingyue's sister Li Xinyue. From this turning point on, it is the sublimation point of the book. After that, there are the remaining three immortal kings in the lower realm and the family composed of four immortal kings. It is a more heartwarming novel and is worth reading.