Urban: Simulating the Path of Immortal Cultivation, My Girlfriend Is an Empress

This book actually takes a different direction. The male protagonist is just a puppet. He doesn't even have the ability to control himself due to future reasons. Listen to me and change the protagonist! Otherwise, don't write it. It's very frustrating to watch.

Well, the biggest mistake in this book is the rebirth. And it's very watery. If you write it this way, who is the protagonist? Who are the supporting characters? There is only one protagonist in this book, that's for sure. What you write like this is putting the cart before the horse. Then how did he get reborn? Is the protagonist in the original timeline dead? In this case, you might as well just write an article about a female channel. And the so-called physique, etc., You only have one physique and one spirit at most, these two are enough. To add two more is to put the cart before the horse. Instead, it feels like garbage. Do you think it is easier to walk on a level with no road, or on a level with a road ahead? No, which one is more popular? Definitely the first one. So is this your invincibility film, or your spiritual energy recovery film? Or what is this? Or create your own way forward? Moreover, your title is also wrong for both of them. There are so many truths, if you change to any point, you will basically have no way out. For the rest, if it's his, let's say it's the heroine. If he moves, he will basically have nothing to do with him later. It's not fun to practice a little bit, and then you can't move forward at the same time as him.

The female emperor grows up faster than the male protagonist. I'm speechless. Chen Beixuan is not so fast. Why can't the male protagonist awaken his memory? Only the female emperor is allowed to do so. After all, the male protagonist suppressed them in his past life. He is the strongest one.

The failure of the reborn

I originally came here to see the protagonist having fun, but this description is not interesting. It is better to add reborn people to the simulation. Otherwise, the protagonist will always have one person to hold him down and it will be very depressing.

Not bad, come on＾0＾~