Urban: Simulating the Path of Immortal Cultivation, My Girlfriend Is an Empress
都市：模拟修仙路，女友是女帝
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 100k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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To put it another way, the male protagonist of this book is just a puppet. Because of the future, he doesn't even have the ability to control himself. Take my advice, change the protagonist! Or don't write it at all. It's so frustrating to read.
Well, the biggest mistake this book makes is its focus on rebirth. And it's also incredibly padded. If you write it like this, who exactly is the protagonist? Who is the supporting character? There's only one protagonist in this book, that's for sure. Your writing is putting the cart before the horse.
The empress's growth is faster than the male lead's, it's unbelievable! Even Chen Beixuan grew faster than her. Why can't the male lead awaken his memories, while only the empress is allowed to? The male lead at least suppressed them in his past life; he was the strongest.
The Reborn's Flaw
I originally came in to see the protagonist have some fun, but the way the story is being written makes it uninteresting. They might as well add the reborn characters to the simulation; otherwise, the protagonist is always being suppressed by someone, which is very depressing.
Not bad, keep it up! ^0^