The System Showed Up Only After I Was Banished from the Holy Land?
被逐出圣地了，系统才来？
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 659k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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Synopsis
Other names
- After Losing My Innate Dao Body, the System Arrived失去先天道体后，系统来了Alternate title on Fanqie
Stats
314Chapters
682Reads · 30 days
712.9kReads · all time
103Shelves
8.1Score
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It's really good, I think. It's very well written. You must have worked hard. It's very good for a writing like this. The ending is also good. Imagination is more important than knowledge. I hope you can write even better next time! 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
It's alright, keep it up 💪 Don't let it fizzle out.
Body Refinement, Qi Gathering, Yuan Dan (Primordial Elixir), Cave Heaven; Divine Soul, Void Realm, King Realm, Emperor Realm; Great Power, Half-Saint, Saint Realm, Quasi-Emperor, Great Emperor;
Author, thank you for your hard work! Keep it up!
[Crossing the border to kill enemies] Leveling up is fast, but cultivation level can't keep up. 🟦🟦🟦🟦Weapon Techniques, Elixir, and Array🟦🟦🟦 Ordinary Yellow Mysterious Earth Heavenly King Emperor Saint Immortal 🟦🟦🟦🟦A higher realm🟦🟦🟦🟦 Body Refinement, Qi Gathering, Yuan Dan, Cave Heaven, Divine Soul, Void Realm (Half-King, King Realm, Emperor Realm, Great Power, Half-Saint, Saint, Saint King, Great…
This book is well-written, with well-developed characters, plot, and thought processes. Although there's no female lead, it feels very realistic. The only drawback is the excessive use of time spans. Reducing the time spans to one-tenth would have been more effective; otherwise, the constant use of tens of thousands, hundreds of thousands, or even millions of years feels overly exaggerated.
The author writes well; the story is immersive and exciting! The protagonist is intelligent! Keep going!
The structure is clear and concise, and the ending is decent! Overall, it's not bad! There's no need to fill in some minor plot holes; just use your imagination.
It looks good, but I wonder how far Li Nan went later.
Hard work pays off! 👍👍👍👍