The Little Cannon Fodder Is Always Hunted by the Boss

Let me talk about the overall view first. If you like the charming wife type, you can join it without thinking. If you are looking for the excitement of unlimited streaming, then you need to consider it. 1. The plot is smooth and the transitions are OK. But there is one most important problem, which is, as mentioned in the comment section, the side tasks are heavy and similar to nesting dolls. Looking at the first two planes, side tasks account for more than 25%, which is too complicated. It can completely enrich the main plot, reduce the side plots, or reduce the difficulty of side tasks. 2. Character fullness. In a Jiaojiao wife-type novel, you can count the characters as supporting characters (this is normal, but it seems to be uncommon in foreign countries). The appearance of the protagonist is very detailed, but after experiencing so many games, the protagonist should have undergone a transformation, or at least an improvement. But I've almost finished watching Country Bride, and the main character still hasn't made much progress, and I get bored easily. In the second game, that is, the rich family, the author clearly highlighted some of the protagonists. Facing the upgraded copy and the alienated chef grandma, the protagonist kills her. However, it was too short and was not shown again in subsequent plots. 3. Slicing and proportioning, I feel that there are too many characters so far, almost all of them are acquaintances wherever I go in the countryside.

Who knows! ! This article directly touched my heart! ! ! The content of each copy is very good, but I prefer the first copy! ! The young master who is loved by everyone really has a strong sense of belonging! ! ! Of all the people, Angel is my favorite! It's hard to understand Angel. Maybe at first I was a bit confused because of his similar appearance to Jiang Xiaoxu, but the more I watched, the more I liked him! The picture of the black-haired son of a god and the little god together is really beautiful, and it feels as if a vicious dog and a god are together! ! ! The author's writing is superb! I strongly hope that the author can produce another character similar to Angel or similar to the first copy! ! ! Every time I see Xiaoxu with other people, I think of Angel, even when I'm not looking! I really like him! ! This is the first time I like a character so much in Tomato! ! It's because of this that I have the desire to comment! So can the author create a similar one and let him and Xiaoxu stay together longer? !

It's a good read. It's a tomato-skinned crabapple bone. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration], I love it so much, I even downloaded it separately, just because I was afraid I wouldn't be able to watch it anymore [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss] x The tension is superb, the writing is very good, and Shou is a kind and cute little beauty. Of course, I don't really like this kind of stupid beauty character in the general unlimited flow novels, but this one is an exception. The key is that what he writes is so fragrant. It is the kind of feeling that just writing some small actions can be very fragrant. It may be like Durian Thousand Layers. You can only find out how fragrant it is after eating it. His kind is not like other The general unlimited flow highlights the plot of the level and the wisdom of the protagonist, and is more like the role-playing of a little beauty. Anyway, it is very fragrant [OK], the fragrance flies to me, it really fragrant to me [send my heart], it is really fragrant, the author Kaokao will not consider opening an account on Weibo, complete the R, I will definitely pay attention, and will definitely pay attention [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I have always liked big books. They are well written, the structure is very clear, and the foreshadowing is very good. No part is superfluous, but I have finished reading it. It is a book worth tens of thousands of people. Please update it. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Love it! (ˊ˘ˋ*)♡. It perfectly fits my understanding of a heartthrob. The writing is very good. I just wish this book was not born in Begonia. The main thing is too little, and the second thing is too little. Really like it! ! ! (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

I feel that the author's writing style is quite good, and there is nothing too stuck in the description. Then, because it is a heart-throb novel, it doesn't matter if the subject is described in a more beautiful way. The emotional transition is also pretty good. All in all, there is no problem with the writing [Sending Hearts] Then let's talk about the storyline. Personally speaking, although these copies are more popular [loving], the author's descriptions are still more emotional and full of tension. The male protagonist is a bit soft-tempered. Some people may not like such a male protagonist, but to me he is quite attractive. Then, if there are book friends who want to read the book review and then decide whether to read this article, I will briefly introduce it first. I just express my personal opinion [love]. The male protagonist has a soft character, but he also has his own bottom line. He is the kind of child who was pampered before entering the horror game, so his personality is a little more pampered. I don't think it's okay. Then, those slices are actually quite popular now. Those who like it like it, and those who don't like it don't criticize it. After all, everyone is reading to have fun. If you don't like it, let's not talk about it. Let's list them first, which may become a highlight (only for some people, but for me, this happens to be based on my XP). The male protagonist has a soft personality, and then he is a heartthrob, and his attacks are slices. There are many in one copy (those who have seen this routine, basically understand it) Anyway, I highly recommend it. I really recommend it. If you don't like it, don't criticize it! My child, the book I pushed was criticized, and I don't want to be criticized again! Thanks! ! !

Goodgood It's so good-looking, I'll update it soon! ! ! Xiao Xu is so cute, I really like Xiao Xu's character haha However, the points of each time and space transition in the first copy are a bit blurry, not clear enough, and sometimes easily confused, but the others are very good!

It's really good to watch. It's the first time I've found a good one on Tomato. But seeing how they keep talking about who the protagonist is, I really feel like I'm sick of stupidity. . . How many times have I said this is slicing? Can't I check the settings if I don't know? Good impact on perception

Well, it means that our wife's personality is amazing! Love it so much! There are also these scenes, so touching.

I like the first world very much [Adoration] The beginning of the second world made me so angry [Angry] So I skipped it [Working on the manuscript] The author's logic is very perfect [Admiration] I just can't let the attack and reception be so brutal [Angry] Especially the myocardial infarction that I watched at the beginning of the second world [Aggrieved]