Honkai: Star Rail: Dreaming of the Starry River

The writing is very good, the logic is online, and it does not violate the plot too much. However, it may be due to the slow pace and slow promotion that there are fewer people reading it. Em... It should be better if the number of words increases. Congratulations in advance to the author for his data to take off. When I saw the 99+ red dots, I almost thought I had been bullied by the Internet. After clicking in, I found that the author's comment area was full of hunting, and there were a lot of Ah Ha Lezi people.

1. The most important thing about fanfiction is not to be OOC. 2. The writing style is delicate, the structure is clear, and the description is detailed, a level rarely seen in Star Iron fan fiction. 3. Don't stick to the main line, and have a full understanding of the world view. 4. The pace is slightly slower, suitable for watching and thinking. Very good piece. However, as of the first volume, my impression is that the pace is indeed a bit slow. My feeling is that after the boxing gym incident, there can be less description of characters and details, and less pen and ink, because I feel that the characters and the background of the lower area that I want to express are very full at that time, which can speed up the speed. My humble opinion, if necessary, I will change it, if not, I will encourage you. I hope that the more I write, the better it will be. Among the fanfics I have seen so far, it ranks first in my heart.

The plot is exciting. It does not use traditional rebirth and time travel, which adds some interest to the story. The protagonist does not know the personalities and status of the characters in it, nor does he know what achievements his friends in the underground area will have in the future. There is also no protagonist who is very powerful at the beginning and beats everything. Among the Bengtie fanfics I have read, this one is very interesting, but there are too few.

(If you don't want to read it, you can just read the last paragraph of the summary) This book is the best Beng Tie article I have ever seen. Compared with Bai Luo next door, Jiang Jiang from Azur Lane, and Poria from Beng San, they are all quite outstanding in fan fiction. The characters in this book are very strong, very vivid and addictive, and the author will have a good future. This book is really great. If I have to talk about shortcomings, there is nothing but a knife, which is unacceptable to Tai Dao. This kind of knife can deepen emotions, which is more like an advantage than a shortcoming. The feelings the protagonist gives me, I think of a collection of contradictions, calm and crazy, whether it is the emotions and personalities of Silver Wolf, Kafka, Brunia, Seele, Cocolia and other characters. Still some habits are very consistent with the settings. The earliest snow globe made the character of Brunia emotionally perfect, almost like herself. The plot of Belloberg fully demonstrates this dark law of survival. The Great Guardian must protect everyone, the nobles must be careful about the liquidation of the Great Guardian, the people in the upper class must be careful about the nobles, and the people in the lower class want to live in the upper class... In the game Bengtie, Belloberg did not give me much impression. This book can be said to have deepened the background of the game. I hope the author can complete or deepen this history in the 1.1 Beloberg museum event, or let the protagonist participate in this event (if it violates the main line, don't pay attention to my suggestion). If there is a main plot, I still hope that the pioneers and the protagonist will get to know each other. Can I choose the female protagonist (I simply think the female protagonist is good-looking). Finally, let me summarize this article. The recommended points are that the missions have strong characters and the writing is good. If you play the game, you can better understand the background and content of the game. There is no cliché to follow the plot, it is very thoughtful, and the plot is not long but concise. It is not suitable for those with a weak heart because there is a scene with a knife. The protagonist is very indifferent to himself and wants to see Young Master Pianpian go. My last words are just for reference. Please read the article for details before drawing a conclusion.

A good Bengtie fanfic, there is no invincible character at the beginning, and the male protagonist is well portrayed and very realistic. "When you are in darkness, your heart is toward the light." I have stocked up on more than 90 of them and finished them in one click. If I have nothing to do, go play some Cocolia.

Very good, everything about the characters has to be restored. Anyway, I can't find any faults. The game just came out, not long ago. I don't know how the author plans to write it. Should he create his own plot and wait for the main line to be connected, or wait for the main line directly? I originally thought it would suck because of the low income, but it didn't. The ending was really awesome.

Knives, not many, but fun! So cool! Author! More! Is this your strength? Family, friendship, painful parting, ah! What a wonderful story! The dusty feelings are waiting for his opener, who can only observe in secret!! How! How! It's full of fun! Praise Aha!

The author's writing style is really good, and he has a good grasp of the characters of the original characters without destroying the original characters. The story is also well designed, with one kind, one kind... In short, I hope the author will work hard ↖(^ω^)↗ and continue to update This book is finally no longer restricted, and you can see it by searching for keywords, oh oh oh oh! 😢😢[laugh][laugh]

The writing is really good. I like it very much. Come on (๑>ڡ<)☆

Awesome, the best railway fanfic I've seen so far