Fly, My Disciples! If Anything Goes Wrong, You’re on Your Own!

So well written! The characters written by the author are all loving, which is rare in online novels. Moreover, the author has his own ideas and routines but is not clichéd. In my eyes, it has surpassed most Tomato novels by a long way. Sometimes I even doubt that I am reading a published novel and hope that the author can continue writing. I couldn't help but offer Tomato's first reward, please update it oooooooo~ (By the way, there are currently five reminders for the latest chapter, and there are exactly five book reviews, and they are all from the previous one. It's so pitiful. When will such a beautiful novel be recommended)

The writing is good, the story theme is interesting, and most importantly, the logic is pretty good. Small suggestion: Since it is a group portrait narration, the character events can be described in more detail, and the rhythm of the group portrait can be slower. After all, one of the highlights of the group portrait is the perspectives, personalities, and events of all parties. Compared with the single-line brainless protagonist who is pushed in waves, the details of all aspects are more important, more foreshadowing can be set, and the progress can be slow. There can be more descriptions of unit plays. If you can hold on, you can write a single unit play as a complete novel. The original subject matter of group portraits is not considered popular, and more attention is paid to details. If we follow the traditional single-protagonist recommendation without thinking, some readers of group portraits will be lost. PPS: The style may not match well with Tomato, but this style doesn't seem to be mainstream anywhere now. Maybe some more traditional paid platforms will be better.

Very good. It's very interesting and beautiful, and the characters are all three-dimensional. I'm also surprised that the second apprentice is a female. I thought this article would be classified as a male video, and the protagonists are all male. Both the male and female characters have their shining points, they are great (lack of words) All in all, it's very beautiful. You'll know it once you've seen it.

Why is the rating so low? I copied it from another book. It's so good-looking and has no CP! (The considerate author will also write a side story based on the readers' CPs, I'll blanch the angel ()) I felt great after reading the first story. In fact, I think this format can be used as a unit drama. Write more, write more, it's not enough... I didn't dare to read the second story. I felt like I was missing one piece, ugh... But when I think of Xiaobai still lying at the bottom of the mountain, I feel so pitiful. I'll continue watching when I wake up😴 I really can't understand why the score is so low. The writing is all logical and not greasy. The characters have their own characteristics. The motives and results of the entire action are logical. The parts that should be light-hearted and funny are also very fun. The only shortcoming is that it's too short (I'll make up my review after I've read the whole thing)

Ah! Very attractive! Too short ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! That is to say, is it possible that I will wake up tomorrow and see that this book has updated 100 chapters [grievance]

It has a completely different feel than the previous one. I can only say that the author's writing style is really good.

I cried, my cp was so bad that I didn't cry, but [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] I finally found a good-looking one, and it's gone like this. It's such a pity. I silently wiped away my tears. I'd better go find a book. Author, in fact, you wrote really well. You can say it's curiosity. This book has really entered my heart, and it will really become my regret [almost crying] [almost crying]. Say your final farewell, author. I am very happy to meet you and the characters you wrote!

[Hold face][Hold face] When I discovered this book, I realized that the author had cheated me. The reading experience so far is quite good. The author has a good grasp of the pacing, laying out foreshadowing but picking it up quickly, without being too draggy. It's cool but not mindless, and the main characters are all well drawn. The writing method of shifting the main perspective is also very novel. You can experience the growth and interaction of different characters. The depiction of the entire continent and the background of the story will gradually become more complete as different characters are unlocked. I hope that I can wait until the author comes back to fill in the gaps in my lifetime.

It's good-looking. Each apprentice has his own character. He's a little sick, but not seriously ill. I like it very much. It's to my liking. Every story is wonderful. I won't get tired of reading it in one go. I can feel it. The writing is quite good. I finished reading it in one go. It's very interesting. I look forward to the follow-up plot!

I finished this novel in one breath. The subject matter is really good, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. The author must fill in the holes. The plot is also very attractive, interlocking, and there are always new forces emerging that make people's eyes shine. The characters are also very full, making people feel more immersed in the story. This is my first time reading a plot-oriented novel. I don't know what is good, but if you can show off it, I believe it will be good. Come on! Stable update, sure to take off (๑> <๑)