Fly, My Disciples! If Anything Goes Wrong, You’re on Your Own!

This is so well written! The characters the author created are all so lovable, which is rare in online novels. Moreover, the author has his own ideas, and while there are established techniques, they are not clichéd. In my opinion, the author has already surpassed most of Tomato's novels by a large margin. Sometimes, I even doubt whether I am reading a published novel.

The writing is good, the story is interesting, and most importantly, the logic is surprisingly sound. A suggestion: Since this is an ensemble narrative, the characters' personalities and events can be described in more detail, and the pacing of the ensemble can be slower.

Very good. It's so good! The characters are all very well-developed. It was a pleasant surprise that the second apprentice is a woman; I thought this would be categorized as a male-oriented story since all the main characters are male. Both the male and female characters have their strengths. It's fantastic! (I'm at a loss for words) In short, it's very good-looking; you'll know once you see it.

Why is the rating so low? I came here from another book, and it's so good! No romance, so refreshing! (The thoughtful author even writes side stories based on the couples readers ship, I'm such an angel!) I thought the first story was fantastic! I think this format would also work well as an episodic drama. Write more, write more, there's just not enough!

Ah! So captivating! It's too short! Is there any chance I'll wake up tomorrow and find it's a hundred chapters long? 🥺

It's a completely different feeling from the previous book; I can only say the author's writing is really good.

I cried. I didn't even cry when all my favorite couples ended, but 😢😢😢😢😢😢 I finally found a good one, and it's gone just like that. It's such a shame. I silently wiped away my tears. I'll go find the book again. Author, you really wrote very well. Call it curiosity or whatever, this book really touched my heart. It will truly become my regret 🥺🥺. Let's say a final goodbye, author. It's been a pleasure to know you and the characters you created!

🤦🤦I only discovered the author had abandoned the project when I found this book. So far, the reading experience has been quite good. The author has a good grasp of pacing, planting foreshadowing but also resolving it quickly, without being drawn out. It's enjoyable but not mindless; the main characters are all well-developed.

It's great! Each apprentice has their own personality, a little quirky but not seriously ill. I really like it; it's right up my alley. Every story is captivating, and I can read it all in one go without getting bored. You can tell the writing is excellent. I finished it in one sitting; it's very good. I'm looking forward to the next installment!

I finished reading this novel in one go. The subject matter is indeed excellent, and it has planted many foreshadowing elements. The author must fill in the gaps! The plot is also very engaging, with each element intricately linked and new forces constantly emerging that keep the audience entertained.