Reborn in Water Margin as Ximen Qing

It's very interesting, but the sense of substitution is not very strong. Wu Song is very different from the original work. Wu Song in the original work is not brainless. Secondly, when Wu Song killed Inspector Zhang's family, he killed everyone big and small. So as long as your name is Ximen Qing, he will not argue with you. He will just start killing people. It is better to read the original work in depth. Second, there needs to be some drama. If you say that your use of modern vocabulary is okay, it will be a drama if others also use modern vocabulary. Third, in the later stage, I suggest you not write too much about the relationship between women, so as not to be locked up in a dark room. The plot has ups and downs and a sense of tension, which is great. I saw that it was really just for the sake of being funny. In the future, don't put the history tag, just read the book Water Margin, because The Kettle is also a fictional novel.

As a bookworm, I read countless books. This is one of the best books I have seen in Tomato. It is very interesting in terms of logic and story. The characters of various supporting characters are clearly written, and the character of the protagonist is also very unique. I will give it a 9.3 Rating for the time being. Many books in Tomato have a rating of more than 9 points, but they do not live up to their reputation. I hope the author will work hard to update, and I wish you will become a great writer as soon as possible.

Such a beautiful book only has an 8.2? This is unscientific Five-star encouragement is required. The current update is around the time Gao Qiu was killed. Adapting from famous works is easier said than done, but difficult to say. The easy thing is that the story outline has a template, and it is easier to string the story together. You have to spend less time on the idea. You must know that in many online articles, the outline becomes more and more crooked as the outline is written, and there are major logical loopholes, which makes the readers more and more uncomfortable and have to abandon the article. The difficult point is to use the famous book to attract attention, and you need to write out the characteristics, which tests the author's writing skills. So far, the author is relatively successful and has integrated well with the original work. Before Gao Qiu was killed, he had the original work as an outline reference. He used a lot of ancient vernacular writing methods and had certain literary skills. At the same time, he also mixed in a lot of modern online vocabulary to make the article more understandable and humorous. Even if you read all the way, you will not find it boring even if you are familiar with the original work. This is very successful. After Gao Qiu was killed, he has begun to break away from the original plot and it depends on the author's own performance. So it depends on what happens next. There is such a concept and writing style on Tomato, which is enough to get a rating of 9.0 Or above. I recommend it to everyone [Like] I read from the beginning to the end of February 15th in one breath. It took almost 40 hours before I could comment. The system actually said I had 30 minutes to comment. Doesn't this make me procrastinate? [Punch out]

The writing is really good, but it's a bit rigid. You don't have to have 108 generals. Why is it so rigid? Also, the update is too slow. If you update more than a day, it's really not enough to read. The last chapter is about saving the Queen Mother, fighting Zhao Kai, and more plots about fighting Wuwu Xuanxuan and the Zhao and Song court. It's really cool. They can't tell the difference between the big and small kings.

I've read a lot of time-travel novels about the Water Margin, and I really like this one. It's quite interesting. I hope I don't get into the trap of claiming to be an emperor.

The plot is delicate and relaxed. A very good document, worth recommending

Yes, it's hard to see such good novels these days. It's smart, and the methods of intercepting Song Jiang are indeed reasonable in theory, and each targets the hero's character weaknesses. Especially the opening against Wu Song is very funny. Although some methods may seem far-fetched, they are indeed possible. Not bad, five-star praise

It's pretty good. I've read a very good one of the Water Margin novels. Can the author update more and faster? [Attention] [Please pay attention]

It's great, the plot is well designed, and it was a joy to read!

The author's writing is very good. Although I have only read half of it, the author put his heart into it. The author still writes very realistically about interests and conscience. However, it seems to be missing some scenes, atmosphere, martial arts, and descriptions of battle formations. It's not easy, that's what talent is