Becoming the Supreme Commander in a Different Red Alert

I would give myself five stars () I have modified the rating because the author looks at this work from the perspective of a reader. Taken together, there are actually many problems. I personally think that the setting for the growth of the protagonist is very flawed. A person can become the commander of Fang Qiu in a short period of time. It seems a bit evil no matter how you think about it. Moreover, the setting originally said that the protagonist is a college student, but the actual performance is not what a college student should be like. This is one of them. Secondly, that is the problem of ending the plot. I don't know how other readers think about the issues above the plot. Anyway, in the author's opinion, the ink and focus I spent on some levels are very problematic. Some levels are just written in one stroke without spending too much time on describing them in detail. Finally, there is the original content in this work that has been criticized by many readers. These original content appeared too late (around Chapter 118), which discouraged many readers. This has to be said to be a problem with the setting in the early stage. If there was no basic setting that changing the timeline would produce more time branches, I would have used bolder ideas to create. Finally, the author also hopes that this work can be finished well. I will try my best not to enter the palace. At the same time, as a new work, I also hope that more readers will put forward comments and suggestions for modifications. The author will adopt them appropriately according to the actual situation.

Five-star praise, Red Alert is old, and so are we. The story is fascinating, the plot is coherent, and I support the work. I look forward to the subsequent plot development. I like the fact that changing history will pay a greater price. The core story is told very well, and I understand the development of the story better. There is less Red Alert, less Mental Omega, and less Mental Omega plot. But one thing is that it is not very reasonable for the protagonist to openly admit that he is not at this time. I will follow up with a follow-up review and look forward to what interesting things will happen in the subsequent changes to the world line.

It's a very good Mental Omega fanfic, and the ending is the same as the ending of Soviet Russia in the game (the protagonist exits and completes all the variables he can change, and the war launched by Soviet Russia is eventually backfired by his own arrogance. As the author said, there is no right or wrong in this war, and there is no absolute winner. The Soviet Army, the Allied Army, and the Epsilon Army all have their own positions and struggles. Goal, (but the eldest lady hasn't talked about [Eating Melon] in the follow-up. It feels like a development ending. The battle between the Allies and the Soviet Army in the world changed by the protagonist can actually be written a little more. I still hope to make an extra chapter.) The above is my humble opinion. You can comment below to supplement my shortcomings. After all, I have just started playing this game [please take a closer look]).

It would be better if you could explain the equipment and vehicles. I haven't played Yuri's Revenge for a long time, and I don't recognize many of the equipment and vehicles [face covering] [face covering] [face covering].

When I read the ending and extra chapters of this book, I felt quite sad. After all, we are not in the same world. Even if everything the male protagonist experienced was not a dream, it was almost like a dream... It was the first time I saw a novel on Tomato that had interactions and connections with comrade generals/allied commanders/pagans. I wanted to find other such novels but couldn't find them. Thank you to the author.

Yes, it's a Red Alert fan novel that you can read.

The author can write more boldly. The game is different from reality. In the plot, the number of units in a picture cannot exceed a thousand. In reality, a key battle starts with 100,000 people. The army data in the book can be exaggerated.

There are so few books about Mental Omega, I must support them with five stars.

The process for the protagonist to become a wizard's adjutant is a bit simple. Whether it is virtual or real, becoming a general's assistant actually requires a lot of tests.

I watched the end, ho ho ho, the protagonist is about to take action on the Mental Termination Device. As a second-generation ally, I would like to express my gratitude [laughing evilly] [like]