The Second Female Lead Takes Center Stage: A Calculated Plan, Step by Step into Ruin

It's very beautiful!! But it's so worrying. I want the male and female protagonists to be together as soon as possible.

I'm about to cry. Why is there only one chapter per day? It's so beautiful! It is very novel. The second female lead is a story about a gentle and beautiful young lady. She is talented, beautiful, and has a good personality. It is no longer a blindly time-travel female supporting strategy. The protagonist's ultimate pull is worried about whether our second female lead can succeed. Who will the white rose or the red rose make the male protagonist prefer? Who says that coolness and self-control must be accompanied by beauty and beauty? Come on! The plot of the female protagonist and the male protagonist is not as brilliant as the female protagonist and the male protagonist. It feels depressing and too peaceful.

Abandoned article +n I feel sorry for the heroine, wow, I like Yun Yun very much. However, except for the campus chapter, this article still has a lot of scenes with the second heroine, and they are not related to the main plot. The male protagonist and the second heroine have more substantive interactions, and there are even many cp scenes. Because of the long description, many readers prefer the second heroine. Wouldn't it be better if the hero and heroine reunited after many years and the heroine started pursuing love, and the hero explained the rumors in the later period or during the process, and did not meet Su alone. Of course, this is just my opinion. I don't want to read anymore, so I gave it five stars. I like Yunyun very much, but I really don't want to watch Su anymore.

What can I say? The idea and structure of this book are quite good, but I hope that some chapters can describe more about the male and female protagonists. I think the male and female protagonists have too few roles. As for the progress, it can be a little faster, but not too fast. Can the author write more about the female protagonist and the male protagonist, and stop writing about the second female protagonist all the time? I even suspected that the heroine of this book was not the heroine at all. I waited for the latest two chapters every day, but I still felt very disappointed. Is this article a double heroine novel?

Give it five stars first, otherwise it won't be very good. From the beginning, I just feel aggrieved and don't like Su. Really, let her be the heroine. Xu Yun's description is very similar to the second female lead. It's understandable in the early stage, but what about later? Some people also said that Su should be given a little role. Oh, isn't Su's description enough? It's so annoying! But this is the author's own opinion when writing it, and I am not qualified to say that it is not well written. The writing is very good, but I don't want to continue reading. I wish this book a great success. Finally, I hope that in another time and space, the little fairy Xu Yun will not have those annoying people in her life. She is also the heroine, and she will never be the second female lead. She will not have to have a crush on someone and be happy.

Xu thinks she is the second female lead, but after all she is the real first female lead. There is a lot of space written about Su, which makes it difficult to tell who is the heroine. I only want to see Xu and Jiang Tiantian's love, but sometimes it makes Su and Jiang a couple. Su is indeed a good girl, but this is not a book she wrote for the heroine, and it feels like there is no prioritization. But the author writes very well, looking forward to updates

The male protagonist is gentle and gentle at first, but later becomes cold and indifferent. The female protagonist is mainly gentle and quiet, but most of the sentences in the text have exclamation marks, which is a bit contradictory, and the exclamation marks really disturb the reading, and it feels a bit messy. I think the repetitive content can be reduced, and it will not look so so. It's bland. In addition, Zheng Jiaojiao likes to act coquettishly, so she speaks with ending sounds, but you really don't need to use "~" all the time. It's a bit hard on the eyes and a little distracting. My suggestion is to add modal particles at the end of her sentences, such as "ah", "hey", "na", "oh", "yo", "hum", "hey", "ah", etc. These are my suggestions. [Eat melon][eat melon]

I really like the character design of the female supporting character, and I also like the softness and beauty of the female protagonist in the early stage, who is a goddess-level character just like the female supporting character. Seeing that the heroine is a bit humble in the back, (I don't quite understand, it's just a man. He has never saved the heroine, he is not a childhood sweetheart, and he is not even familiar with her in the early stage. I have to say it is Bai Yueguang! As far as I am concerned, I can't revolve around a man, although The male protagonist is very good, and I think a lot of people will like the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. I don't like the male protagonist very much, especially the female protagonist who confessed her love to the male protagonist and then had a bit of an affair with the female protagonist after she rejected him...) I think a person as good as the female protagonist should live a better life. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is quite slow, especially the male protagonist's enlightenment too late, so it's for those who like a slow pace.

I am the author, and up to this point in this book, there is a big discussion point about harassment when the heroine encounters it. Some people say it is vulgar, and some people say it is disgusting. But friends, this kind of thing happens in reality, and someone may be experiencing it at this moment. Even many people have experienced this kind of thing. Without Xu Yun's warm family members to take care of her, such considerate friends who care about her, and those who have not found their own spiritual salvation, people in real life would be even worse off.

Double cleansing? It would be better if the male and female protagonists make progress faster