A Falcon from the Start, I Become the Clan’s Guardian Spirit Beast

Come on. Just don't be a eunuch. Just keep the quality. My suggestion is that if you don't want to write on a day, just don't write for the time being and don't be perfunctory. Otherwise, it would be so short, I would feel uncomfortable watching it, and you would be tired writing it.

This book is okay, but the author is too short. I need more updates. It's not enough to read.

Shamelessly give yourself a five-star [learned]

It's quite good. Although the pace is a bit slow, the plot is still quite attractive and the characters are well drawn. The protagonist is not arrogant like Long Aotian and can still concentrate on his practice. At present, I personally feel that the shortcomings are double standards. For example, when trying to steal Taoist Aoki's inheritance, the human race tried to dissuade them from attacking the monsters, and ordered the monsters to stop and let the humans go. Such behavior was very discouraging and double standards. In fact, it can be written as S here, and they can, but the matter ends here. It would be better not to rise to the level between the human and demon races, that is, there will be no double standards, and the pattern will also improve. Another one is the Spiritual Root Recruitment Conference. When people are recruited, they are told that they are different from immortals and mortals, and they cannot have too much contact with them to affect their practice. However, their spiritual roots are just like that. They will remain the same for a lifetime if they are exposed or not. Why restrict other people's freedom in this way? Besides, aren't there any mortals in the protagonist's family? Why don't we see them driving away their eldest sons, younger sons, and younger daughters for this reason? If you keep her at home and provide resources, they can use this to cut off the relationship if they have other excuses. Therefore, it would be better to have less double standards, less pretentiousness, more sincerity, and more details. Xiuxian's cultivation of immortality is about the body, mind, and soul. Only when the mind is strong can it be truly powerful. In fact, the protagonist can also participate in the plot more, instead of appearing only when needed. He can use the wisdom of the time traveler to better manage the mortal town and attract more talents. Looking forward to the follow-up

It's been eight hours, why hasn't the author updated? What are you waiting for? I ask you what you are waiting for. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. Get up and update quickly.

Very beautiful, very exciting.

I really like this type of book. It's very novel. I started reading this book after reading Black Water Snake. It's just that the update is too slow. I'd like to give it five stars.

Personally I think it's pretty good. Come on, I hope you stick to it.

It looks good. Don't write the two brothers to death. After they die, Brother Ying can only be the ancestor [crying][crying][crying][crying] It's really nice, but there's a typo

Can the author insist on reading two pages a day? One card a day is really not