[Teacher-student romance in reverse, no System, empress]
Also known as The Sidekick Disciple’s Guide to Self-Preservation and The Myth of the Eastern Zhou. Its official title is The Immortality Tribulation.
When Yan Xuming woke up, he discovered that his soul had crossed into another world and taken over the original owner, who shared his name.
He was the empress’s fifth disciple, with an excellent mentor, outstanding cultivation talent, and a perfect background.
By all appearances, he was the perfect stepping stone.
At his side was his senior brother, whose tragic past and menial status made him look every bit like the protagonist.
After all, when your parents are sacrificed to the heavens, your magic power knows no bounds.
As luck would have it, the empress’s cultivation had been damaged, leaving her without even the strength to resist.
No matter how Yan Xuming looked at it, this seemed like a story where the villainous empress seduced her rebellious disciple.
Having noticed all this, Yan Xuming could barely eat or sleep.
To avoid being made a disposable side character by the “protagonist” senior brother, he racked his brains to stay away from anyone who might be mistaken for a member of the protagonist’s harem.
But the empress refused to follow the script and went straight for her disciple,
while his senior sisters and junior sisters kept “adding fuel to the fire”...
Yan Xuming: “Senior Brother, they made the first move. Please don’t turn me into a disposable side character!”
The writing is immature and the plot is not rich, which is a problem that every newcomer has. I am not well educated and am a newbie, so I hope you readers will be more merciful. I will often read the comments. If you have any good suggestions or shortcomings, I hope you won't hesitate to tell them. Thanks for the support, thanks for the encouragement 😳
Great, keep up the good work, the author [sending my heart][sending my heart]
I see that there are no obvious poisonous points so far, and the content is quite attractive, which is pretty good.
The plot is reasonable and interesting, the writing is fluent, and the logic is fairly self-consistent. However, where the great elder is now, it may need some processing in the later stage. After all, it is an online novel, and the rhythm seems not to be grasped so well. Although I don't know why, it just doesn't have that light and heavy feeling when reading. But as an online article, it has surpassed 70% to 80% of the books on Tomato. It is considered a masterpiece.
Is your qi training better than foundation building?
Many people say it is toxic, but in fact they just read too much of Invincible Wen Shuang's novels. The background is the Zhou Dynasty, and three wives and four concubines are normal. Don't add a few more female protagonists in the later stages just to make the plot easier, just make it a harem novel. I personally think that in this era, the dead girl can help the protagonist grow up and he can no longer be a virgin.
The writing is okay, even if I don't know why these heroines are given away for free so quickly
Good, good, good, good, good
Five-star praise is given
I like it, but social relationships are too complicated