Fleeing Famine in a Chaotic Era, I Build a Mountain Stronghold and Endless Infrastructure

I really like it, but the updates are a bit slow, and the plot is somewhat bland. I hope the female lead's experiences will be more exciting.

The main points were okay, but I didn't highlight her strengths. I made good use of the space I had. I mentioned that she learned martial arts and was very strong, so I didn't write that she was weak, like a gourd climbing a tree or a bow and arrow. Although the plot needs to be developed gradually, I can still bring out her personal beauty.

The writing style is simple and unadorned, and the story unfolds steadily and is engaging, but it lacks a male protagonist who is exceptionally talented and captivating; it's essentially a story of refugees fleeing famine.

Very good, all of the author's books are good.

It's nice, keep going! It's just too short; it always seems to disappear before you know it. 🤦

The book is short, only a dozen chapters, yet it's riddled with flaws and illogical plots. Its strength lies in its attention to detail, though whether that detail is perfectly logical is another matter. The author clearly put a lot of effort into it; it's readable to pass the time, but don't have high expectations. There's a genuinely unfortunate flaw appearing every few minutes.

Great! Realizing a dream-like ideal is straightforward and decisive, black and white 😄. It's not easy to have a healthy environment. This way, everyone can work together and work towards the same goal, making life more worry-free, technology more intelligent, and human nature more simple and kind, no longer exhibiting negative behaviors or mental abilities!

It's quite interesting. The part about the government going up the mountain to suppress the bandits is a bit strange. Didn't Wang Zhiwen or Wang Zhishan tell the government there were only a few hundred bandits? Why did the government send three thousand men up the mountain? Also, the female lead joined the army too easily; they didn't write about her emotional journey. I hope the female lead lives the life she wants.

The rating is too low; it's worth 9 points. I hope the author can update quickly. A good work is one that you want to read in one go and deserves praise!

I read another book by the same author before reading this one!