Honkai Impact 3Rd: A Story That's Not All That Wonderful

I looked at the comments section and asked if I wanted a female protagonist. In fact, I am quite concerned about it because I was studying in Fallou before. As for what is the place like in Fallo? I think everyone who has seen it knows. Wherever it comes from, there is always something wrong with it. Many female protagonists have harems, and of course I am no exception [face covering] [face covering] But what I want to say is what if the author has not thought about how to write a female protagonist? Or if you don't know how to write about a female protagonist, don't write about it. Because I have read too many books like this. The previous ones were well written, but the sudden addition of a female protagonist felt too abrupt, and then it was scrapped because I couldn't grasp it well. I still hope that the author can write in the longer term. After all, there are many Honkai Impact books on my bookshelf. [Pause face] [Pause face] If you haven't thought about it well, or you don't know how to write about a female protagonist, then don't write it. There is nothing wrong with being single.

The writing is not brilliant, but it gave me an inexplicable sense of daily life. I like this feeling very much. There is a slight sense of crisis in the warmth. The protagonist's mental state is also very beautiful. I like this kind of weird temperament. Overall it's good, just missing one star would make you proud ([laughter]

Writing about the pre-collapse civilization period, well... This is a very good work, five stars for it

Hiss, how should I put it? The author obviously updated it in such a short time, but wrote a lot, and the progress was extremely slow, but it should also be a special pre-civilization daily style, but the main line is indeed very slow, but overall it is still good

When I looked at the first few pictures, I forgot that this was a Honkai Impact III novel. I thought I was just reading a campus novel. I was so numb [face covering] that I didn't remember that this was a Honkai Impact novel until I saw the title of the book. [Face covering] In an instant... [Face covering] The book is highly recommended, fun and interesting

I saw it when it was about 450,000 words, and I have been following it for a long time. I thought it was the same as the title of Ellie, but it has a happy ending. Although the writing is not very good, most of it is dialogue. But no ooc! No ooc! No ooc! After three brushes, Civilization is now cool, but Civilization is finished in a sloppy way.

If the author wants the heroine to have a wave of Xier Σ (|||▽||| )

The heroine wants Alicia

I watched the extra episode first and confessed to everyone. Male: No more talking Female: Unintentional: Ellie's attitude is to love everyone (equivalent to a joke), Sakura does not have that idea, v2v chatted for a while and chose to continue doing scientific research. After the protagonist left, he suddenly realized what had just happened (equivalent to no success), Gracie (? Capture, FBI!) Possible? : Hua was very nervous and said she wanted to think about it, (probably she preferred to refuse?) Pado blushed and said she was not ready (it seemed like she had a good impression) Success: Aponya was a little surprised at first. From the later description, it seems that the relationship between the two people is not just the love between a man and a woman, but more like a spiritual resonance. Eden is the most classic one, and you can intuitively feel the ambiguity of the atmosphere. After all, the love you have with Eden is very Eden (as mellow as fine wine). Snake has a very strong personality, so after being confessed and having a crush on him, he went straight to the base (should I say he is worthy of being a doctor?)

That being said, the writing is okay, but there is one problem: the plot is really too light. As of now, there is nothing memorable about it. I think the author can describe some larger scenes appropriately, such as fighting big BOOS with other people, or "for the good of the world, use XX on him". Appropriate passion will make this book more interesting. I look forward to your next work.