Planes: From the Start, I Get a God-Tier Tavern and Raise Dragons

After reading it again, I really enjoyed sharing some of my thoughts. If the protagonist communicates more with his master, he should have discovered a fatal flaw of the architect. If the core skills are converted to other professions, the star power will be contaminated with the information of other professions, sealing the architect's door to the sanctuary. So the architect's first professional building feels that he should find a way to solve this problem, which can not only allow architects to feel the power of other professions, but also not be contaminated by the corresponding professional atmosphere: Active type, after the architect has finished feeling, use the building to help the architect peel off the breath of other professions and store it. Multiple breaths are stored, and maybe it can also create props to enhance the feeling of related professions. Passive type, directly using the building to carry the core skills, and spiritually connecting the building to realize the realization. This kind of professional atmosphere may be called the XXX Professional Architecture Research Institute This kind of building feels like it should have been designed earlier. As an architect, the protagonist wants to follow the path of an architect. Looking at the current thinking, he has to design buildings for all professions. With his talent, it is destined to be impossible to continue to hire other professionals to increase the possibility of exposure. If he does not want to follow the footsteps of his master, he must first solve the problem of smell contamination. At the same time, a building was designed. If it is the first type, and then used to mutate the building, it may be able to indirectly solve the problem of the master's stopping in the sanctuary. Regarding this book, the writing and plot are very suitable for me. Now I feel that there are not many books that I can read all the time. But author, can you change the method of reducing word count? Nowadays, we often describe the protagonist's thoughts in large sections, but they are still very obvious and childish thoughts. This makes the protagonist very stupid. You really have nothing to write about. Write about the food cooked by the protagonist, what special star power circuit the protagonist has learned, and write about the newly mutated building attributes: You have used this thing as an upgrade before, such as totem poles and toilets. A large number of buildings, mutated one by one to simply upgrade the quality? You wrote building mutations, not building upgrades! Shouldn't it mutate into some strange abilities? The notice board in front of the protagonist can spawn rabbits around it regardless of the situation (do you think this ability is ordinary?), But you just upgrade it later? When upgrading the quality of a power totem, in addition to increasing strength, how about adding penetration (ignoring a little bit of the enemy's armor)? Or maybe it would be weird to increase the exercise effect? The quality of the toilet is high, but can it be converted into fertilizer? More, can't we collect feces within a certain range of the territory? Or it can be converted into high-quality fertilizer (accelerating plant growth and improving land quality)! You can also interact with dragons and fairies. You can write all these, including food, clothing, housing, clothing attributes, food, the protagonist's house, and travel vehicles. The attributes of these are also OK. There is so much to write about, so don't write about the childish psychological activities of the protagonist, it's too cheap.

Except for the fact that the content of the title is a bit low, this book is simply unbeatable. The world view is innovative and novel, the interpretation of the realm even has a bit of science fiction, and the memes and explanation of the profession of architect are amazing. Starting from Chapter 145, I don't know whether the author is too obsessed with the development of the world view, or simply thinking about the word count, and the result is that the development of the setting is too long and boring. The rhythm is very sporadic, and often in the middle of a story there is suddenly a whole chapter of pure setting. It feels like watching Douluo 3 many years ago. There are thousands of words in one stroke. I hope the author can control it a little.

What a wonderful book! Boundless planes, infinite possibilities! In the long river of time and space, legends will also lose their anchor point and decline... Everyone is looking for the direction of their growth, hoping to achieve the crown! The world view of this book is particularly shocking! Highly recommended!!!

I will write bit by bit. As a reader who has been immersed in the world of online literature for many years, extensive reading has made me pay more attention to logical self-consistency, writing style, and your structure and overall sense of rhythm. Your book is well written, and it has its own ideas. I suggest you watch "Tiangong". There are some good things in it. Especially the ending, which allows people to distinguish the ancient tripod, leaves a deep impression on the audience. It feels a bit in line with your idea of ​​the Great Wall. There are also 12 upgrade levels for you to build buildings of 12 genres. I hope every move you make will be beyond my expectations. Bring me (reader) different surprises. You cannot look directly at God, cannot describe it, cannot understand it. Suddenly I was reminded of "I Am God" and I hope you will be better. Cthulhu is a concept put forward by a modern American novel: chaos, disorder, and pollution. Are there gods of rationality, stability, and moderation that are incompatible with the Three Pillar Gods? Deductive method, this reminds me of mystery again. It always interprets other people's genres, but lacks its own core architectural settings, which makes my eyes shine. The addition of games has increased the diversity and interest of the content, and there is more content to write about. This requires controlling the general rhythm. To conceive what exactly do you want to express? And it's better to write well and don't break off in the middle.

I hope the focus is on the protagonist and not writing too much about the live broadcast There is also Bob. I don't know much about it, but the Bob in my game has never felt melancholy or cold. In the game, he is more approachable, warm and friendly.

Well, the content is very good and very novel, and it has a new idea of ​​lord's writing. But I feel like it's appropriate to add some description of the contributions of the subjects. Throughout the book, I only see the protagonist protecting them, but the specific contributions are not reflected. It makes people feel that even without the subjects, the impact will not be great. Especially during the 51st wave trial of the Zerg, they were just slaves who had just bought them a few days ago. There was no such deep affection. It was just that the leader was injured, so he went to fight himself regardless of the danger.

Maybe the word count of this novel is a bit low at times, but the logic is very clear, the writing is very good, and why is there such a thing as a free novel with a low word count? Some novels have really low word count. This one explains the logic clearly to you. It's very good. I give it five stars.

It seems to be an old-fashioned structure, but in fact the world view is very strict and unique, and it has a very novel architect system. It also has elements of scientific research and creation. The writing is good, not brainless and cool. According to the current update, there will be big secrets in the world in the future, which is exciting. The estimated score should be above 9.6.

The worldview is grand and rich, but the reading experience is not very good, because the author's biggest shortcoming is that it is short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short! Later appendix is ​​too lengthy

A very creative book. Compared with other inexplicable lord stories, this book has a more complete world view, a unique extraordinary system, and rich professional forms. In the main plot, the relationship between the various organizations is relatively reasonable, the relationship between the characters is not obtrusive, and the protagonist's improvement method is unique. It is not a boring upgrade by fighting monsters, but downplays the plot of the protagonist as an architect in combat, and puts more emphasis on exploration and creation. However, the author's writing style needs to be improved, the narrative structure is a bit messy, and there are many loopholes in the logic.