Xuanhuan: The Invincible Saint and the Master of Lying Flat

After reading 40 chapters, I still defended the original heroine, and the other heroines didn't have a single line, saying that they were inappropriate lickers. But when something happened, I still defended her every day. Every time I met the original heroine and the new heroine, there was no news at all. Does the author still want to keep the original heroine? I remember at the beginning I said there were a few women who liked the villain protagonist, but now I don't see any of them. My opinion is just to change the way of being a dog licker.

No need to look at licking dogs

What are you writing about? Press our intelligence to the ground and rub it

Not so good [face covering] This kind of novel should be a cool type, or a behind-the-scenes manipulation type, but as a result, you can just come here and press the villain to the ground and rub it [face covering] It doesn't feel good at all. It's obviously a messed up protagonist. [Vomit] The protagonist is written on the villain's skin [you read carefully] Author, you have to remember that in villain-type novels, the villain's life experience is invincible, even if he is not invincible They are also the top group of people in the mainland, but it turns out that you, any powerful person, can hold down the villain's hammer without even a protector behind him, oh no, some wait until they are about to die before being called out by the villain, otherwise they will not come out [face covering] Some of the broken systems are the same as none, normal. Originally, the novel should not go anywhere, and the plot will not go anywhere, but you just have a hand in everything, not good, really not good [vomit] To sum up: write the protagonist in the guise of a bad villain

The writing is very messy, there is no clear main line, and the main character is a bit short. It's so confusing. After reading more than fifty chapters, I still don't know what it is about [vomit][vomit][vomit] One star in the sky!

From the first chapter to Chapter 62, and seeing all the negative reviews in the comment section, I actually want to say that in my personal opinion, this book is not excellent, but it is not that bad either. Maybe everyone thinks that its disadvantage is that it is not white enough or cool enough. This is indeed a shortcoming. It can be seen that the author's writing style is relatively ancient, and it is obviously different from the current popular style. However, if you look carefully, you can see that the author is adjusting his own style and writing method. The author likes to dig holes, and I thought it was a big hole or that the author had forgotten it, but he found that the recent chapters have been gradually filled in. Although the filling is not deep, the logic is reasonable. But I think the biggest problem with this book is the antagonist. Scenes with few people seem to be okay, but scenes with many people immediately expose the author's shortcomings. The characters are more obvious in facial makeup, and the antagonist scenes are basically carried out in a single line. Multi-character interactions will sometimes ignore one or more characters. Although there are corrections later, it can be seen that it is not very natural. In terms of plot, I can only say that it is quite satisfactory. The general logic makes sense. There are not many evil points, but there are not many outstanding points. When it should be ups and downs, it seems peaceful. In addition, the protagonist's golden finger is obviously very bad, and it is understandable that he does not appear many times, but the performance is too little, and the descriptions are relatively tasteless, so this may be something that readers find bad? Well, I originally wanted to give it three stars, but based on the principle of more encouragement, I added one star. I hope the author can update it stably so that the quality can be even better in the future. Come on!

Isn't it normal for the sick fiancée to have never met the protagonist and not admit it? He also used this incident as an excuse to hurt the protagonist. The writing is very unreasonable

I can't stand it anymore. The writing is really bad. The tags are also randomly added. When you click on them, you can see that they are nothing but "grievances" and "grievances".

Actually, I just have a question, is the other soul in the heroine's body the heroine from the original future plot (that is, the plot with the original male protagonist)? So this is a lot of fun, did you teach your past self how to avoid lightning?

How should I put it... The protagonist feels like he has no character. He said he would lie down and actually run around. Even if his father comes over and beeps, he will not find a place to squat? Even if there is a system, you can still run around and cause trouble. To put it bluntly, this system is fundamentally inappropriate.