The Evil Dragon's Eye

Well, I just gave it a try and it didn't last long. Let me talk about the benefits of this book first🎇 1. It can be seen from the first ten chapters alone that the author has great aspirations and has built a great world view, which is quite good [eating melon] 2. The number of words in each chapter written by the author is really high🎆. On average, each chapter in the first volume has 3000~4000 words🎑. This is really a lot [note] 3. The author portrays the characters quite well✨, it's not bad, and the plot is also pretty good✨✨ ✨Let's talk about the shortcomings…ლ(｀∀´ლ)✨ 1. The author's paragraphing of the first 50 chapters is really bad. At first glance, they are all densely packed with words🎂. I can't read them. I can't read them at all. 2. Judging from the author's writing style, there are quite a lot of inner monologues. It feels similar to the female videos from 2017 to 2016. There are quite a lot of inner monologues, which seems a bit awkward✨ 3. Um... Second grade two? Anyway, I look like a middle grader, especially with those inner monologues🎈 Anyway, that's it. It's better to change the previous paragraphs🎇, they are too dense, especially the first three golden pictures🎉. I only saw three pictures to see if they are attractive. Finally, I wish the author will get better as he writes✨✨

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Overall, it's pretty good. You can tell that the author's composition is great. However, since this is the first time I've written a novel, some details haven't been handled well and it's still a bit immature. However, the ability to write novels is not something that can be achieved overnight. If you can handle the details and some structural aspects well, the novels will get better and better [laughs]

I hope everyone's comments are honest. It's normal to have good times and bad times. If you like it, you can leave a comment and tell me, Crab, I will update it carefully

Author, I feel a lot gained every time I read your content. I like you very much. I hope you can continue to work hard! Author, I have read every piece of your content carefully and I really like you💕.

The author has endless creativity, the multi-protagonist plot is impressive, and the fighting plot is particularly exciting. The book has a dreamlike magical feel, which is fascinating and unique. I recommend it as a good book [like][like][like]

Very nice, no objections will be entertained. [Cool][Cool][Cool]

Generally speaking, it's okay. Although the pace is slow, you can code a lot of words this way. The author should continue to work hard and don't be a eunuch. I will suffocate to death [almost cry]. I knock, this is ready for modernization.

There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the atmosphere is well created. The plot is flowing, but it feels a bit niche. Please give me a good review to encourage me.

The beginning is a bit like the beginning of a fairy tale, king and queen, this is my favorite tone, I am a fan!