Doomsday: Starting Out with Just an Orange

I really like it. It completely exceeded my expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is very careful and tight. The delivery speed is very fast. I am very satisfied with my purchase. I feel that the real thing looks better than the picture, and the price is directly proportional to the quality. I am very satisfied with this purchase. If you like it, hurry up and buy it.

The book has no shortcomings overall, but it also has no advantages that attract reading interest.

I was almost dissuaded by the title of the book, but fortunately I took a look. The subject matter is quite novel. Although I don't play games very much, but judging from the author's skill settings, it seems that it should be a reference game. I think it is quite interesting, and the writing style is also good. It's just that the current chapter is too short, and I don't feel the tension, intensity, excitement of the end of the world. It feels like the author is just showing off his oranges while defeating monsters and upgrading. Feed it first, then look at it after it gets fatter. The author should update quickly, come on ＾0＾~ (Give me 5 stars first, if the author doesn't update it properly later, or if there are any signs of eunuchs, I will come back and give you a star [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully])

After taking more than 20 classes, the child has not only improved his spoken language, but also gained courage. He is much more generous when speaking than before. He is now confident in reading classes and feels relaxed when talking to the teacher.

It looks pretty good so far

It's pretty good. Personally, I feel that the biggest problem is that I don't know the direction of the protagonist, so I just follow the flow of the game, then unlock the skills, and inexplicably add a void, and then continue to mix. In addition, the supporting characters basically have no sense of existence. They will change one after another. Basically, the protagonist will accept tasks, fight, gain experience, and encounter the tool man by chance, and then change to the next one. Then if the starting skills are not good enough, a new profession is unlocked, and then the process is repeated. You can consider giving the protagonist a main line, even if it is a phased one, and fix the existing supporting characters, even if they are just supporting characters, so that it does not look too fragmented. For example: discovering possible clues from the same time travel. Or the world is so big, you want to see it, etc. Describe the shelter by the way, and bring out a few supporting characters or bosses with target characteristics. At present, it seems that the protagonist has no worries about eating and drinking, and there is no feeling of apocalypse at all. In addition, it is recommended to control the progress of the upgrade and reduce the power of the skills. It feels a bit fast now. Looking at the invincibility and repeated monster killing and upgrade, I guess it won't last long.

It started well. When the god general showed up, he became the captain. I thought I would write it later, but the aliens didn't show up even after killing them. If nothing else, it should be almost finished. Overall, it was okay, but it was a bit unwritten in the end. I was too anxious.

It's a very good post-apocalyptic story, but the main character is too frustrated, and there are many skills that the main character lacks. Too many people have written using the skills in the game, and the author's original skills are also passive [eating melon]

How timid and weak.

Let me find gold∩_∩. Apocalyptic novel, the protagonist relies on the skills chosen before time travel (it seems to be from League of Legends) to survive and grow, the writing is clean and neat (too clean is not good, there is no fun, the main plot is fast), IQ is online, good book