The Longevity Sword, the Immortal of the Mortal Realm

It's very well written. I haven't seen such a great book in a long time. Each character is vivid and vivid, the IQ is online and not brainless, the pattern is revealed bit by bit, step by step, the story logic is clear, and the tone is not bad. It's really great, come on author! I can't stand it anymore. It looked good at first, but the more I look at it later, the more disgusting it becomes! Too sloppy. The main character is a virgin! Others are going to kill you because you have a big heart. Let it go. It's disgusting to watch!

Special early summer, special flavor, special feeling, special beauty!

It's almost perfect (in my personal opinion), I can't think of any words to describe it. The characters are vividly created, and the plot connection is very natural. Everyone in the book has their own calculations, their own ideas, and they are independent and distinct. I like it and hope I can continue writing it and have a good ending.

The character portrayal of the protagonist is quite outstanding, and is better looking than most of Tomato's so-called 9.5 Or above fantasy heroes. A good work should be an interpretation of the emotions and human nature of many people, or the struggles and choices of people with different identities in a large background, something that can arouse universal resonance and allow readers to relate to it... Creation is not easy, so I don't want to say too much, so I will give it 5 stars to support it!

This may be the first time I have seen this kind of novel with a protagonist who is both wise and almost demonic. It seems quite enjoyable and the plot is particularly compact. So far, it's pretty good. Good luck, author.

Such a beautiful book, the rating is really low. I really like the character of the male protagonist.

I have now finished reading the Liuyun Continent chapter. As a bookworm who has spent more than 2,600 hours on Tomato, I feel that this book is already a god. The average IQ of this book is online, and the protagonist is as smart as a demon. The author's character portrayal is also very good. It is not like other novels where you only remember the protagonist group after reading it. The second male lead Li Qianfan, the suspected heroine Dongfang Lan, the great demon Chongxiao, Liu Shanhe and his righteous daughter Liu Qingmei, the national teacher Zhao Zhen, the messenger Wei Lianxing, the prison envoy Wu Donglai, the scholar He Qing and his white-bone wife, the four most prodigies in the capital, and the villain Fang Lin, all of these people are vividly portrayed. As far as the Liuyun Continent chapter is concerned, the plot is smooth and not laggy at all. It has the "coolness" of a refreshing novel, but it is not brainless or even a bit brain-burning. I personally think that the two stories about the incident in Scarlet Xiao City and the great demon Chongxiao are very well told. I am looking forward to the new plot as I follow up on the book. After comparing it with other books, I found that the author has too many words per chapter. I would like to call him a conscientious author.

This is the Red Dust Fairy "Immortal life" and "mortal world" This is a Taoist priest who follows the Tao. Great great great Update soon

The writing is very smooth, and it's pretty good in Tomato. At least I, an old bookworm, can read it, but there are so few reviewers. Please keep updating the author. I have read Chapter 298 so far. I have something to say. The first map is really beautiful, with all kinds of wits and twists and turns. Starting from Chapter 206 [The Second Ascension Map], I don't know if the author of this book has changed. It is no different from the previous novels. At the beginning, you collect a little pet and run around, run various chambers of commerce, and then change your name, and then take the first place, and then guess I was testing the protagonist and his pseudonyms to see who is stronger and who is weaker. When I saw Chapter 260, I was jumping through the table of contents. I really felt that the original author had sold the book. Although the supporting characters in the following are not intellectually subdued, there were too many running stories and there were really no highlights [facepalm] [facepalm]

After seeing a lot of book reviews that changed the map, I had just finished reading the first volume when I posted the review. As far as the first volume is concerned, the reading experience is quite good, but it can also continue to polish. Different from other cool books in other worlds with golden fingers, this book is cool with a brain. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into the plot and characterization. He does not make the protagonist invincible all the way, but depicts the social background and explains the world view on a macro level, and profiles all living beings on a micro level, making the entire first volume quite complete. Of course, some details of reversal reasoning are not explained enough, the occurrence of events is slightly abrupt, and a large number of sentient beings will also cause some interference to the main plot, but this does not prevent the first volume from being a good book. If you analyze it word for word, it is certainly not as good as a classic, but as a Tomato article, it is already rare! Only for personal reading experience Big cheers for the author