Rejected After Confessing, I Got a Cultivation Accelerator

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I didn't dare to comment until I read the entire updated book. I'm not sure about the author's positioning of the book. Looking at the title and introduction, I think I'd like to read it as a fun book. However, the role and appearance of the intermediate system are not much, which makes it not enjoyable to read. And I would like to make some suggestions, that is, Wu Mingjie is the vice-president of the four major colleges, and the actual person in power should be someone with deep influence in the city. The portrayal is a bit mindless, and the digging of holes is too obvious. As soon as the protagonist enters the campus, he sends his disciples to target him and even personally threatens the protagonist with his friends. I think it can be changed. Like a smiling tiger, he can have a good attitude when meeting him for the first time, say that he is familiar with his father, and then give some less important resources, find a student under his control behind his back and let him provoke a conflict between his disciple Shen ** and the protagonist, reprimand the person named Shen in person, and then talk to the person named Shen in private about his teacher It is not appropriate for Yang Chen to conflict with him, but the Shen family has a Martial Lord, and he has always been very arrogant. He must not be able to swallow this breath. The seeds of hatred have been planted. As for getting the Thunder Origin Bead, it can be changed to "I think you are the best new student. I will give you a challenge task. The old dean has wanted to get it back to help the students grow. Every time the star gate is opened. I will choose a student to try. This year I think you are the most likely to succeed in the past. Then I promised you the opportunity of the Forest of Steles and the Holy Spirit Spring. Then I turned around and controlled some of my subordinates to pass the false news that Yang Chen was involved in other things to the Shen family. After entering the Star Gate, I colluded with the aliens to ambush the protagonist. For reference only [laughing] [laughing]

Be clear about digitalization, don't write anything by mouth, five stars, come on,

It's okay, it would be better if the storyline were a little more detailed

Good book. It's just too short

It's exciting and passionate, but there are some flaws that I want to pay attention to. Come on!

The idea is pretty good. Not even mindless. Although pig's feet have a lot of beauty. No stallion yet. Hope it's not a stud story. Keep it up

Martial arts, skills. Separate

The protagonist needs to break through the cave as quickly as possible and then control them.