Tales of My Rebirth as a Black Phoenix

Recommended by the author. After reading the first few pictures, I will briefly describe it. I feel that the author's writing style still needs to be improved. No matter how good the outline is, it is meaningless if it cannot be described in detail. For example, there is a section in the first chapter - who is the master of the sword? The master of the avenue of swords, who uses his swordsmanship to compete with the ten supreme avenues, faced three evil masters in the evil invasion war tens of thousands of years ago, and finally caused one death, one escape and one permanent seal. Such a magnificent person could not withstand the pollution in the end, and had no choice but to be reincarnated. In just one paragraph, kendo was mentioned twice and very close to each other. The word "finally" was used three times in a row in the second half of the paragraph. Let's take this paragraph as an example. Based on my understanding after reading the book for many years, the first half of the paragraph mentions the comparison between "Kendo" and the Supreme Avenue twice, mostly to show that Kendo and the Supreme Avenue are not on the same level but can be comparable to them. But if you mention it twice before and after, it will seem strange to read. It would be better to replace "kendo" with its corresponding level in "Comparing the Ten Supreme Avenues with Kendo" to make it more fluent. For example, change it to the category of "medium avenues are comparable to the highest". The three "finals" mentioned in the second half are changed to "last, final, and then" in order, which makes the reading feel smoother. There are also issues such as the paragraphing that feels a bit strange, and the use of punctuation marks that are relatively simple and rarely reflect the artistic conception. I won't go into more details. However, I still like the subject matter. I will give it 5 stars for the time being to support the new book (at least there are no big logical problems in the front). Keep up the good work.

Loli is still a royal sister, I hope she is no longer a loli [crying]

Well, since the author has invited me, a young reader, to watch it, I must give the author a lot of face. The writing is good. I can accept post-post and no cp, but I prefer Baiba. After all, blindly promoting the main line is a bit boring, and the emotional line can be supplemented.

Okay, come on, author [laughing evilly] I hope to be single or lily [laughing] Don't marry

Isn't it still a hundred? I'm tired of seeing it

The valley is long, the butterflies are dancing gracefully, the piano and the harp are harmonious, the fairy music is lingering, and the singing is sweet. It is said that this life will be worthy of the loss.

Does it look good, single or lily? I hope it is single

It feels pretty good, please give it a try! I hope it's Baihewen

Well, if you are getting married, I hope you can tell me in advance. If you don't like that, I will give you five stars first. Thank you.

It's quite nice... I'll give you some recommendations when the time comes.