Transmigrating into Evangelion: Rewriting the Plot

This EVe fanfic is the most exciting one I have ever seen, but if you, the author, dare to stab me, I will definitely send you a blade!!! But I believe the author won't stab us

I have a deep understanding of EVA. I don't want to talk about the plot, but only about the portrayal of Asuka's character. I can only say that it is exactly the same as the original work. Moreover, the protagonist of this book has feelings for Asuka that are hidden in the shadows. He can't see clearly but always stays by Asuka's side to protect her silently.

The plot is still very good and reasonable, it should be casual and casual, the main plot is not procrastinating, the writing style is okay, it does not look embarrassing, and it respects the original work and does not make random changes. Anyway, it looks good. I love watching it.

This is the best New Diary Evangelion fan book I have ever read. It is the best and strongest on the entire Internet. I strongly recommend everyone who likes EVA Asuka to read it together. It can be regarded as a personal completion for me. It made up for my regret that Shinji Ikari was not with Ming Yuexiang in the end. At the same time, my own surname is Huang, and I felt very involved, as if I was with Ming Xiang. I was very satisfied. I am very grateful to the author for his hard work. I am also a senior in high school this year. I was originally going to take the college entrance examination in 2025. Because I took a year off, thank you to the author for giving me more motivation to face the journey of my senior year. This book will always be the TOP1 in my heart among Neon Genesis Evangelion fanfics. I was so happy that I got the candy.

It's beautiful, I hope the author will keep it up

As for this book, among the EVA fanfics I've read, well, it's one of the best-looking ones. And the author is really awesome at writing this book at this age. Well, let me finally say that the author should continue to work hard. Write more of this type. (Hey, actually I just didn't read enough) Finally, I wish the author that his career will get better and better, and that he will continue to be inspired to write novels.

The plot was okay, but not to my liking. The writing style needs to be improved, but I won't give it a thumbs up. It is indeed much better than other fan EVAs on this site. As an aside, I prefer the EVA plots outside the site, in the comics. After all, they have many methods and strong abilities. Even if they are not bulldozers, they can still be pulled to work under them and complete the boundary flow. 🤦 The funniest plot I have ever seen, resurrecting Ikari Wei, who beats Ikari Yuantang in the street (asking you to change my mother's plan, asking you to abuse my son, asking you to mess around)

If you are full of faintness, you must be full of faintness. The plot arrangement is appropriate and does not feel fragmented or abrupt. It feels like watching a fan drama version. The explanation is also very good. For people like me who have only read the EVA once, I can understand all the plots that I didn't understand before in this novel. It's just that the old and the new are two different worlds. Then there will be two Asukas? It's completed, the novel is completed, and the world in the novel is completed. Who understands the feeling of loss in the middle of the night 😢

Come on, author, don't underestimate the bond between us [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

However, he is uneducated and can go around the world with just "f*ck". This fanfic is really good to read, the plot must have been carefully polished, and the character of the protagonist is also very unique. I hope the author will persevere. I haven't seen such good fanfics on Tomato for a long, long time. Support Laman and recommend Laman.