Reborn, I Flirt with Myself

Pros: The copywriting is very good and very attractive to me. The plot has twists and turns, and it is not a mindless novel for the general public (for example, Duan's behavior and the protagonist's attitude), and the psychological description of himself falling in love with the protagonist in the second life is also good (although it is a bit fast). Needs improvement: At first glance, I have the feeling that the world view is very grand. The characteristics of the article about cultivating immortals make it difficult to become a short story. The reason why this article is so short may be that the author has too few descriptions. The extremely short length of this article gives me the feeling of a synopsis of the story, as if this is not a novel but an outline. A novel is not only about describing the plot of the story, but it is also important to depict the tasks and express the emotions. Specific suggestions: Too little description means more descriptive language and less descriptive language. Some storylines can be written in more detail, including story background, character emotions, scene descriptions, etc. [Note: The above are all personal opinions and may be biased. The author and book friends are welcome to correct or communicate. I am not writing a long review to criticize anyone or to show my superiority. I just feel that this article can be better and the author can be better. Reject personal attacks. You can argue with me. ]

There is always a feeling that it is both beautiful and interesting. But it should mostly look good. It's a bit regretful that I've finished reading this [face covering] I really didn't expect Duan Bowen at first... Oh, what a pity, what a pity Also, I always feel that Chu Suiyun sympathizes with Nian An. No love [Petrified] What a pity for Senior Brother Han You. Destined but not destined After reading the whole story, Duan Bowen seemed to be the most distressed [crying] so miserably. I hope you will be happy in the next life. Be with the people you love. Destined Taoist Companion.. The system is really bad [staring]

To be honest, the subject matter of this book is very novel. I haven't seen anything like this for a long time. Although some parts were weird when I read it, it was still acceptable. Overall, it's not bad. The emotional lines are very rich. I hope this book will become popular.

Although it is short, the storyline is exciting

It looks good, but Duan Bowen is really a pity...

This is a good book, I like it very much

Not bad, it feels like an outline hahaha

Their emotional line is very beautiful and the plot is also exciting

It's good, but it's too short. I want to read the modern chapter.

I think the score is a bit low. I think it's pretty good-looking, a bit like a compressed package. If I wrote about catching monsters, I could write a lot more. The ending was indeed a bit rushed.