(Dragon's Journey) Luan Yu

I am the author of this book. This article is a channel article. It is updated one day later than the original website. The original website is a storybook. Since the accounts have not been merged, the paragraph comments cannot be viewed, so I cannot reply to any questions. Please understand~

①The logic is clear, the storyline is well conceived, and the details are well handled. The author handles the details very well throughout the book. Many details echo back and forth and can also correspond to the original drama. In addition, as the case is investigated in depth step by step, sometimes following the five flavors and sometimes following the perspective of the king, it makes people feel like they are immersed in the situation and investigating the case and exploring together with the protagonists. The discovery of clues, the development of the case and the final detection are reasonable and natural, with clear logic. People can't help but get involved and think and get nervous together with the characters in the book to discover the final truth. The cases are intertwined with each other, and many details are foreshadowing, echoing back and forth, which makes people marvel at the case! ②The protagonists cooperate with each other and have a good understanding. The leader's leadership, strong martial arts and keen insight; Shanshan's disguise skills, martial arts and calmness; Xiaoyu's martial arts, loyalty and super execution ability to defeat the world's invincible opponents; An Luan's financial ability, connections and overall thinking; Wuwei's medical skills, intelligence, luck and courage brought by thinking about the people and those around them. Everyone has a role to play in the search for the Queen Mother, and no one can be left out. Many places in the article rely on the mutual cooperation between the five people to turn danger into safety time and time again. ③The group portraits are very well depicted, and there are no tool figures. The characters all have their own characteristics, and the group portraits are well written. It can be seen that they are all fresh people, and they are not treated lightly just because they are supporting characters. Many of the newly added characters have their own uses and lives, and their character traits have not been lost in order to highlight the protagonist. ④The attraction of detective work>CP emotional description attraction. If there is anything that is not very good, I think the emotional details between the protagonists could be handled in more detail. I have now watched the last case of the Dragon Slaying Society. The emotional development between Long Shan and Luan Yu is very natural, but maybe it was more conservative in ancient times. I feel that the emotional description is not very detailed. Most of them end with looking at each other and smiling. I was very happy at the beginning, but after watching too much, I felt a bit tired. So maybe this is why the author lets us figure it out. I initially clicked on this book because of the CP, but gradually I became attracted to the storyline, and CP suddenly became less important. Overall, this book is highly recommended and very engaging. My favorite cases are Chishui River and Silver Case. The stories are cleverly conceived, the details are intertwined, and the truth is unexpected but reasonable. There are many parts that make people marvel at the case. The folk customs and people's livelihood issues involved in the case gave me a deep understanding of the importance of the country's leadership to the people's living and working in peace and contentment. Comedy, detective, court, and emotion are all blended together, and you won't lose money if you invest in it.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I can't wait to leave a comment. The writing is super, super good. It gave Long You an ending, allowed Yulong to find the Queen Mother, saved so many tragedies, and made up for so many regrets. I also saw that Long Shan had become a real person. The most important thing is that brother Xiaoyu has someone to love and accompany him. Our Aluan is the group favorite, everyone dotes on her. Wuwei also has a small fragrance, and he successfully became an official. There are so many CPs, they are all so sweet and loving. I hope I will work hard to update it, but it's not enough to watch [full]

It looks good, even if a new person comes in, it won't be out of place. When I was watching TV, I thought it was a pity that Zhao Yu didn't have CP. Now it's perfect, hahaha

It is very rare to find a book about Long You Xiaoyu's CP. Long You's cases have a more satisfactory solution. Xiulan of Baishanzhuang and her husband divorced, the child belongs to her, and the heroine helps her to do business. The heroine opened Xinhua Bookstore and opened people's wisdom. The heroine helps the poor, but she does not give them jobs like Wuwei, but gives them jobs and lets their children study for free. Moreover, the heroine is the true heroine of the female channel. She has her own thoughts and is not assimilated by the world. Although her living environment is dangerous, she has solved all the problems one by one and firmly established herself as the head of the family, leading her family to change the world. Xiaoyu is not an accessory to promote female channels. The story is framed by Longyou, but the heroine is not a vase. She truly plays a huge role, making the story more in line with modern values ​​and solving problems more satisfactorily. She is a plug-in for the original Longyou. Longyou becomes more exciting because of her, and those who have been favored in Longyou have a better way out.

I have been reading this book for a year, and recently I found a lot of comments I left at that time. I am very emotional. It is really time to write a comment for this article. It may be a bit long. I like this book very much. Over the past year, I have read the first thousand or so chapters with great enthusiasm. I can't remember the exact number. It was probably a little after the group returned to Beijing. I was busier in the second half of the year and almost read a hundred chapters in one go. Because it is a channel article, in order to express my love, I wrote a comment to the author, and also became a member for a while. However, due to work reasons, I was unable to follow updates every day, so I returned to Tomato. In terms of characterization, the author has a good grasp of the characters of the four people. He outlines the movements and expressions of the four people in just a few sentences. Although part of the reason is that I am able to imagine the four people's expressions skillfully, the author's description is really detailed and fits the original characters very well. The words are directly converted into pictures that appear in my mind. Occasionally, I even think of a sequel, so I should take this shot. Regarding the new character An Luan, although the sequel of the book should be called Luan Yu, there is no doubt that this is a great group portrait article, but the existence of An Luan as the "heroine" of the book is a highlight, which makes Long You's story change based on the original film and television, but also rationalizes these changes. An Luan's identity complements the four of them, and Anjia's industry provides convenience for everyone to travel around the world. An Luan from modern times brought new ideas, which gave Long You's story new possibilities in addition to finding his mother and solving crimes, and made the subsequent story of switching to the court more reasonable. In terms of plot arrangement, it broke the almost completely independent layout of the original drama, making each case have a certain connection, and added a lot of background and details on the basis of the TV series. What I like the most is that these stories make up for the regrets in the drama. The uncle found his way back, Prince Fu did not turn into a black man, the mother was found, Chu Chu is no longer able to carry everything alone, he has relatives and friends, and they are companions who are looking for the bright future of Chu country together. Moreover, before returning to the palace, he arranged to revisit his old place and explained the situation of the characters in the previous article. The writing was warm and interesting. The previous case not only connects part of the content in the play but also adds a lot of innovation. The case is very interesting and has a certain profound meaning. Hong Xiulan is unwilling to return to Baishanzhuang, Hanxiang postpones her wedding, and Song Xing'er's boldness all pave the way for a series of women's rights struggles after returning to the palace. The author has made a lot of innovations in the story. It is not limited to the common humanities of simply solving crimes or simply describing Long Shan's feelings or describing the life of finding his mother and returning to the palace. In the early stage of searching for his mother, he solves the case and fights against the Dragon Slaying Society (again, the Dragon Slaying Society here finally unfolds step by step, and it is not a villain who has a certain scale of organization). This leads to the problems of the court, and naturally transitions to the intrigues after returning to the palace. Maybe the author didn't plan to write this part at the beginning or didn't expect it to be so long, so he put it all in the postscript, but I think this part is quite exciting. The grand structure of the court line (to make up for the weak point in the play, after all, the focus of the play is not here, Tang Xiang seems to be omnipotent), the intricate relationships, the irreconcilable conflicts between aristocratic families, nobles, and common people. Fifteen years of accumulated shortcomings cannot be changed in one day. With twists and turns of development, bold reversals, and compact plot, the turbulent court is a battlefield filled with smoke. An Luan's dream, Chu Tianyou's ambition, and the fate of everyone are slowly unfolding... It can be seen that the court line is very long and grand. The current progress may be less than half or even just the beginning. I am really looking forward to the following chapters. When can Xiao Luan stand on the court as a woman? When will Shanshan go to the border to see where her father stayed? When will Wuwei no longer need to go out to "spread money"? The prosperity of the country and the people's safety is Chu Chu's pursuit. Xiao Luan brought the ideas of freedom and equality. Although it is very idealistic, I am very happy to watch the Chu country enter a new era under their leadership. It can be regarded as a vision of hoping that the Longyou Group will continue to be good. Finally, I want to say something. When I went to the storybook last year, I found that the author started updating it in 2021, so it has been almost 4 years since I wrote it. I really admire this kind of perseverance and hope that the author will persevere in finishing it. Such a good work must be complete. (The author probably can't see it. If any book friends have seen it, I hope they can read this good work. It's really good!!)

Is it because the rating is not ideal or because it is too old that the author chooses to abandon the article and not update it? I read it in a storybook a few years ago, and kept up with it. But I really stopped following it because of various things. But now, a few years later, I still remember the story I read, so I read it again on Tomato this month. I have been reading it for almost a month, and I finished it with 200 chapters left. I thought that more than 2,100 chapters were the final chapter, but I skipped to the last chapter and saw that it was still a serial chapter. There have only been a few chapters in 25 years, and it is still unfinished. I still feel so uncomfortable. Author, do you want to leave us viewers with endless reveries like the original drama? [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] I thought that the following was the story of various protagonists, but it turns out they are still dealing with court disputes. No, please update the author quickly [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying]

This is the best Longyou fanfic I have ever read.

It looks good. When can we see our king and Shanshan get married?

I love it so much. It makes up for a lot of uneasy feelings. I feel like Bai Yueguang in my heart. After the Longyou TV series ended, it was too hasty and nothing happened. The big imagination is very reasonable. Like it.