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Explore more →I Beg the Hokage to Read the Novel and Not Lick Konoha! ! !
Villain writing is the best
Naruto Has No Masterpieces (Except Dave, Artist, Sister Juan's, and Divine Land)
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Brothers, I am currently short of books, so I would like to ask you to take out the books in your library, Kangkang.
The Hokage Has No More Masterpieces to Argue With.
A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
Unlocked Kamui Eternal Kaleidoscope, but Not in Naruto World
I Am Certified as a Writer, How Can I Withdraw? Waiting
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Naruto: Eternal Kaleidoscope, All Wooden Shields, Nine Magatama Samsara Eye, System
Douluo joins Wuhun Palace to fight Tang San
Naruto, Edit Obito, Inlin Challenge Four Battles, Fight Against the Ninja World
Is There No More Masterpieces in Naruto's Current Life?
Naruto Live Broadcast of All Ninja World Has No Protagonist
System, no protagonist
Tomato Masterpieces of All Time
I want to read a book similar to "I'm Not a Drama God". The entire series of novels in history, highly recommended!
It's True That Naruto Is Getting Worse with Each Passing Year, so We Can Only Use the Previous Books to Compare.
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Beginning with the Twin Kamui".
The Male Protagonist Has Trained Hard Since Childhood to Become Invincible.
I want to read a book similar to "Armor: As a Human, I Appear at Full Level".
Looking for High-Quality Naruto Stories
Is There Any Hokage Who Is at His Peak at the Beginning?
I've Really Had Enough of Diaosi Acting, Let's Do Something Decent
A Novel with More Than 4000 Chapters! !
Fantasy, urban cultivation, men and women, treasure appraisal, farming, urban daily life.




































































































At present, I feel that the potential of this book is still relatively high. As long as it doesn't collapse later, it can basically be rated highly.
It's very good. I hope it won't be unfinished and can be updated to the end. This book is very interesting.
The writing is very good, good luck to the author! (ง•̀_•́)ง Author I am your first book review! ! You didn't give me any likes! ! I am your first book review ever! ! At that time, you only updated three chapters before I found you, but you didn't give me any likes! ! !
To be honest, I haven't read Naruto fanfics for a while, because they are almost boring, but this one is well written, although there are some points that everyone thinks are problematic, but! Not a big problem, right? It's all about being good, isn't it? For example, in more than sixty chapters, the author wrote so detailed about the pocket and the protagonist. It can be imagined that the author is very attentive. Come on author.
[If Danzo had a grandson] [If Naruto had a brother] [Thinking] To be honest, this book is beyond expectations, and there is even a feeling of "The reason why Danzo is so perverted is really because he is a lonely old man? After all, Sarutobi is not so outrageous!" Naruto's life has been much better because he has a brother, and Sasuke has not had his family broken up. In short, it feels like Menma has done everything but not very deliberately. Naturally, everyone has been changed, which is very comfortable to watch. The plot is reasonable, the ending is okay, and the supporting characters are also very vivid and not rigid. It's a good movie and I recommend it.
It has established a funny but ambitious protagonist character. Different from other dark novels, the protagonist and his partners have a deep bond. They have changed the future of Konoha and tightly connected everyone in Konoha. They want to become bigger and stronger without scheming. They are not said to be relatives of Naruto. But he steals Naruto's wife. He has his own ideas. He is very simple and in line with the basic character of a child. At the same time, he also shows his strength and desire for peace. This is the perfect Konoha. If it doesn't end badly, maybe the Naruto fandom can achieve greater glory. Come on!
A superb and interesting work, this book follows most of the settings of the original work, but with the emergence of the protagonist, it deviates from the plot of the original work. With the protagonist's continuous participation and influence in making trouble, the plot is reasonable and humane and goes on the right track. Judging from the writing style, this book is really written with a sense of immersion, and the personalities and various changes of many characters are also well described. Hiruzen's indecision and Danzo's decisiveness affect the life and death of the entire Konoha Village. The two will relax a little and change a little, making the entire Konoha Village prosperous. From the plot point of view, the Uchiha genocide incident, Konoha's collapse plan, and various original plots have deviated from the overall direction due to slight changes, but they have not strayed too far from the scope of the plot. The writing is still very good, and the description of the changes in the character's personality caused by the plot is also very interesting. From the setting point of view, the first scene of the first picture has a very puzzling beginning. Menma, who originally existed in fantasy, actually appeared in the beginning of the normal real-life original plot in the Nine-Tails Rebellion. Moreover, it can be seen from the performance of the protagonist in the article that the protagonist is not It is pure Menma, nor is it adult Menma, nor is it the childhood Menma who has no memory, but the body of a time traveler who used the concept of Menma to materialize. He has a very familiar memory of Naruto, and he also clearly knows about his own origin, but he is also very confused as to why he appeared. Emmmmm, the shortcomings of this book cannot cover up the advantages. It is enough to show that the balance of the advantages and disadvantages of this book is relatively good. It can be said that it is a good work.
It's a good book with a daily comedy style (。ò ∀ ó。) The prank trip of Menma and his friends ~ I hope the author will continue his work and update more, and I'm optimistic about you (✪▽✪)
Come on, author! It's really good. I still prefer to read the sunny Konoha. Basically, all novels are written by Danzo, and the three generations of mini-boss in the early stage are similar. It's just that 110 is not enough. I watched it in two days.
0K, after reading so many Naruto books, I feel that the plot of this Naruto is more attractive, the plot is also relatively novel, and it refreshes the three views of Danzo. It is considered a very good Naruto fanfic. Hope it won't be discontinued. Hehe I can't see enough, I can't see enough, ah ah ah ah.
It's very well written. I actually like this kind of Naruto fanfic. I don't like to read those conspiracy theories. I feel like most of them are black for the sake of being black. It's very uncomfortable to watch. I feel like everything can be applied to Konoha F4.
To be honest, I think it's really good, better than other new Naruto books. If you don't read 100 chapters a day, how can you read enough?
It's rare to see a book that whitewashes Danzo and Hiruzen, but it's really good. The author would like to work hard to update it! Awa! ! !
Pretty good. I'm used to reading novels where Danzo is a bad guy, but this time he's a good guy. I'm not used to it [Thinking] It looks like the main character is a eunuch [laughing awkwardly]
It's beautiful. There are very few Konoha with this kind of sunshine. Most of the fanfics I read are Konoha and its Darkness. Although it is indeed reasonable, it is inevitable that you will have a fixed impression if you watch it too much. Aribe is still very good [OK]
Divine book! Comparable to one of Dave's books or even better! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง The characteristics of this fanfic: warm, relaxed, pleasant, group favorite, very, very perfect! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง If you don't die, you will die! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Show them all to me! !
This book is a blast. Compared to others, this is the most comfortable Naruto fanfic I have read on Tomato. It improves the contradictory settings of Inugishimoto without ruining the character design, and makes the characters vivid. At the same time, it also adds its own settings based on the original plot. It is perfect. It makes up for a lot of the regrets of the original work, and adds some small details in the dialogues to enrich the whole work. It makes people comfortable but not too boring. It grows while being mixed with warm daily life. It is not too abrupt and makes people relax. Come on, I hope there will be better works.
There has been a shortage of books recently, and it's rare to find the ability to read them. Danzo and the third generation were whitewashed. I feel that the whitewashed Danzo is really good and contributed a lot of exciting scenes. The early stage is more humorous, focusing on the bond between the protagonist and the protagonist group. It's a pity that there is no heroine. I feel that the author's interaction with Fu in the middle and later stages of the series was very good, and I hope she can become the heroine. The pace in the later stages is a bit faster, a bit closer to the original. The timeline in the book is a bit wrong, but after all, I've read the novel, so I won't pay attention to that. Sasuke traveling from the future is quite exciting. The author says it's an invincible novel, but I don't feel like it. It should be considered a pseudo-invincible novel. Finally, thank you very much to the author.
There are no conspiracy theories in daily life, and overall it looks good. However, the identity of the protagonist's time traveler is quite mysterious. It is there at critical moments, but it feels like it is not there in daily life. Also, it is too short and the side plot is not good (for example, Mizuki gave me the feeling that a small character does not deserve so many chapters) [Chigua] The ending is a piece of cake. I have been following it since the beginning of more than 20 chapters. Now that it is finished, I feel like I am old [laughter]
I'm not saying this, I've seen it The best Naruto fanfic ever Mainly because of the character of Menma, which is somewhat different from those darkened Narutos and so on. After all, there are nine speakers accompanying you at the beginning And it gave me a new understanding and new understanding of the role of Danzo. This author is good, I can get to know him deeply The final summary is that the writing is good. The content flows smoothly. Be open-minded. Except for the combat power in the middle, there are some mysteries I think this book can still be highly recommended, it is very well written.
There is no poison, it is the least brainless and cool article I have ever read. There is no system or outrageous hooks. The combat power is well balanced. Menma's strength has improved in a traceable way. It looks extremely normal. The key is that everyone has a good ending in the end. There is no big sword in the whole article.
A very good Naruto fanfic with a novel style that allows you to see a different Konoha, a different Narusa, the Twelve Strong, as well as a humane Danzo and an arrogant and arrogant Menma. It has been completed, so feel free to enter.
It unfolds very interestingly. At the beginning, Menma, Naruto's twin brother, travels back in time. Naruto and Danzo raise each other as grandsons. The existence of the protagonist gradually changes Danzo. The plot collapses from the beginning. Danzo wholeheartedly paves the way for his grandson to become Hokage. The protagonist is a perfect Jinchuriki, and the invincible style is very enjoyable. However, the plot felt uninteresting after capturing Orochimaru alive after the Chunin Exam. The protagonist was basically invincible, and it felt like most of it was water. . . Around chapter 170, I started reading it.
The perfect score may be a bit high, but 9 points is definitely there. The reason is because the five books I read in succession were all dark. After reading five books, it's really scary to think about the original anime again. Naruto's childhood was so miserable that the people didn't know he was a fourth-generation orphan. The destruction of Uchiha and the Hyuga accident. According to the author's thinking, Konoha is still very dark. Sarutobi Hiruzen is also hypocritical and false. The passionate and fun feeling of watching anime when he was a child is gone. So when I read this book, I had the feeling of peeling away the dark clouds and letting the sunshine shine onto the earth. It is indeed better to be a little sweeter. Darkness makes people think deeply, sweetness makes people happy
The novel is very good. But I just can't understand it. But there is no big problem. The rating of 9.3 Is really not low.
It's one of the top Naruto fanfics I've read. Recommended[note][note][note][note][note][note][note][note][note][note][note][note]
This book can be said to be the best version of Naruto that I have read so far. The story is tight and detailed, but it is not brainless. All the settings are very reasonable and fill up a lot of regrets. If I want to talk about the shortcomings, I feel that Menma and Xiangling have too little interaction. They are too fast and have caught up with Sakura and Sasuke in the original. But this is normal, so this book must be given full marks and I look forward to the author's next work.
The plot is very complete, and then the characters are cleared up very smoothly, and they are cleared up as they should be. Like Orochimaru, from the beginning he wanted Konoha to change its owner, and then later the old man stood in front of him defenselessly, but he couldn't do it. It's really smooth. Recommend[top post][top post][top post]
I personally like to read this type of writing, which is very traditional about Naruto. I hate conspiracy theories and writing about the development of science and technology. Science and technology are written in the name of Naruto. If we want to read science and technology articles, we should not read Naruto.
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