
One Piece: The Retired Admiral Starts Out in Nika Form
海贼:退役大将,开局尼卡形态
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- 379k Words
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- 6mo ago
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- Fanqie
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276Chapters
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I think the fourth fruit should be the Renren Fruit, Phantom Beast Seed, and the three-legged Golden Crow form. As soon as the true fire of the sun comes out, you will die if you touch it, and you will be disabled if you rub it. The last five fruits are the Renren Fruit, Phantom Beast Seed, destroy the Chaos Demon God form, directly destroy the pirate plane, and directly become the next Hokage, Gan Otsutsuki.
Hahahahahahaha
It looks great, but there are a few disadvantages 1: It is unreasonable to send three generals to kill a recently retired general at the beginning. What do the navy below think? It is only reasonable to send the hidden power of world conquest. Two: Since the killing has already begun, why not go directly to the holy land of Mariejoia and kill them all? It will be no problem to protect yourself in the awakened Nika form, and a Celestial Dragon with 300 attribute points can kill at least a dozen if he is calculating mentally and not paying attention, and then run away after killing. Even strengthening while killing. Three: It just feels too passive. There is a killing system. As long as you kill people, you will have attribute points. Although you can't say you can kill civilians, you can catch pirates and kill them. Except for killing a Celestial Dragon at the beginning and then killing a Doflamingo and his group, others have come to fight. When it is over, there is no movement. I am looking for a group of people to kill the protagonist, and the protagonist fights. I feel so passive. Why not take the initiative. But overall it's pretty good, it's quite fun to watch, and it's invincible throughout.
--🌿 🍍 🍦 🍉 🌿—- ᵀᴴᴱ ᴮᴱˢᵀ ᴵˢ ᶠᴼᴿ ᵞᴼᵁ The summer wind rises from the fields and falls for the first time, allowing all things to grow.
The five-star praise is for the first eighty-three chapters. Brothers, listen to me. Don't read the last eighty-three chapters. You will definitely regret it.
Give me a five-star support. The writing is very, very good and very passionate. Come on [make faces]
Not powerful. . . Only one Celestial Dragon was killed. You should go to their J base
Come on, come on, come on✊
Very good. It's so enjoyable. I don't even have a rating, which is really unjustifiable. I really like this book.
Well written. It's a cool article. I'd like to give you some suggestions. There's a problem with the hate system settings. To kill the world, you have to have a reason to hate the world, such as killing family members and joining the navy. The retired Tianlong ordered the navy to hunt him down. On the way to escape, his family was killed. He hated the whole world, hated this twisted world, and aimed to kill the world and rebuild the world. Rebuilding the rules and adding system abilities to increase the number of fruits is a bit less satisfying. You can add other familiar abilities. Since killing the Celestial Dragons, killing single digits is a bit boring, you can add more sadistic killing plots. The killing must be darker. There are also many kingdom abilities that can be mentioned. Especially if you forgot about the "Title" which is almost awesome! ! ! ! ! Personal suggestion, don't affect the author's mentality,