What Bad Intentions Could an NPC Have?

This is a top-notch work in the online game novel genre, and it certainly lives up to the trend of online game novels, mostly involving the real world or a fusion of two worlds. The writing style is good, and even the straightforward narrative parts are enjoyable to read. I personally found the plot quite good; there are a few minor flaws, but nothing major.

The book is good, quite creative. The plot is a bit cliché, though. But this is Tomato, so it doesn't matter. A group of people wearing clothes is not a group of images. Forget it, what a waste of all that background setting and foreshadowing. Such a good novel could easily have been written as an ensemble piece. But this is Tomato Elementary School, so there's nothing we can do about it. Alright, I shouldn't have any expectations for this novel anymore, I'm off to read it.