Dustbound Fate

As expected, there are no bad books that have been handed down during the early days of online literature. After reading this book, I felt really hard to calm down and couldn't help but say a few words. Let's get straight to the point without saying much. Let's talk about the good points first. First, the writing style is simple and gorgeous, which is the biggest feature of this book. The whole text has an ancient flavor. For example, when describing Dezong, he uses the writing style of Fu to depict the splendor of his palace, the variety of treasures, and the grandeur of his palace in an extremely gorgeous way. The impression of the treasure land of the Immortal Family is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. The second is the ingenious conception. The first few chapters talk about the immortal's past and present lives, but when the immortal was about to complete his reincarnation, Ji Ruochen appeared in the middle of the road, so the immortal died and Ruochen came out, and there was an aftermath, which made the readers dumbfounded. The third is characterization. Ji Ruochen is both good and evil, and even more evil, which may not please readers. However, Gu Qingxianjue, Yin Yinchijue, and Qingyi Zhijue, how can these three people not make readers sigh and admire them. I still remember when Gu Qing met Ruochen for the first time, he was so affectionate and touching. He said "Only in front of you can I pretend to be gentle and virtuous!" And "A man of seven feet must be as heroic as ten swings and ten battles!". I can't forget these two sentences after reading the entire book. The former is affectionate and generous, the latter is brave and sincere. I am extremely envious of her true love for Ji Ruochen. Gu Qing is a good wife! Zhang Yin Yin was overbearing at the beginning and always made things difficult for Ji Ruochen. He was not annoying. However, when he was apprenticed to Su Shu, he also said something that I will never forget. The general idea is, "If you beat him once, you will lose your whole life with him." Qing Yi is probably the one who understands Ji Ruochen the best among the three, so I call her wise. However, she also has an infatuated side. She blocked the fatal blow for Ruochen at the end of the book. Alas, it also broke my heart. Such a beautiful woman can't help but be deeply in love. Now that I've talked about the good points, let's talk about what I think are the shortcomings. Just as blessings and misfortunes depend on each other, the advantages of earthly fate also include its disadvantages. First, the book has a strong classical style, but it also suffers from the shortcomings of complicated writing and slow narrative pace. Especially during the period when Ji Ruochen was practicing Taoism, which takes up a large part of the book, it is extremely dull, with almost no story advancement, making it difficult for readers to keep reading. I personally think that the content of the entire book can be compressed and modified to a certain extent, leaving some of the text in the first half for the second half. The second is the character image. As for Ji Ruochen and Yin Feng in the first half, Ji Ruochen is ruthless but a little indecisive, and his whole person is gloomy, while Yin Feng is straight-forward, clear and unrestrained. I personally feel that Ji Ruochen is not as good as Yin Feng, and Ji Ruochen is not worthy of Gu Qing. Ultimately, I don't like the character Ji Ruochen, and I think other readers should be the same way. [Laughing and crying] It's like the protagonist of "Zhibeiyou". It was such a good book, but it had such a despicable and wretched protagonist. I was so angry that I gave up the book and haven't read it again. Third, there seems to be a sense of separation between the previous and the following chapters. I know that this book has been interrupted for a long time, but I don't know which chapter it was interrupted from. I feel that it was probably when Ji Ruochen fell into the underworld again. In short, the writing in the first half is very slow, as if you are in a deep pool of still water, and the overall atmosphere is slightly depressing; while the second half seems a bit rushed, as if you suddenly transformed into a river, and the atmosphere becomes wild and heroic. Although this is in line with Ji Ruochen's change of mood, the second half still feels too rushed. Many people such as Han Yan, Huai Su, Yun Wuhua and others have no part in the second half. I don't know how it will end. However, they occupy a certain space in the first half and have a close relationship with Ji Ruochen. And how could Fairy Gu Qing end up like this? Of course her ending is too difficult to write. Whether it is Ji Ruochen or Yin Feng, it seems that whoever she ends up with is wrong. Alas, such a perfect goddess probably shouldn't have appeared in the first place, but without Gu Qing, where would the fate of this world begin? The above is my summary and thoughts after reading. I hope more people will read this book, and it will not be in vain for me to write so many words. [Laughing] Oh, what a wonderful thing it would be if I had someone like Gu Qing by my side. Such a beautiful woman, I can't do anything... By the way, there is still a hole that has not been filled, that is, when Ji Ruochen saw Guang Huaisuna, who was lurking in the Tao Te Sect and framed Ji Ruochen?

One worldly fate, hundreds of reincarnations, the origin and destruction of fate, and finally perfection

After reading the first two chapters, I thought Yin Feng was the protagonist, which made me feel uncomfortable in the early stages of watching it. When Gu Qing and Ji Ruochen were in love with each other, I always felt like they were being bullied. In the end, the plot of revenge was clearly explained, and there was no delay in the emotional aspect (Yinfeng was really a big grievance, he was defeated from the beginning to the end, and he also suffered the punishment of reincarnation, got beaten, died one more time, and his wife is gone), but there are still a few supporting characters who have not been followed up, so it is considered a good ending.

Yybbwc continues the writing style of golden sentences in this book. After reading xd and watching Chen Yuan again, it seems like a story in another time and space. It's the same fear of walking on thin ice, but as one of the largest factions in the world, there is no need to go north and south like in xd, which saves a lot of plot. I can't help but sigh to the author, "There are thousands of worlds in my heart." I picked one out and shared it with you.

The best fairy novel, the writing style is smooth and retro~

The depth of writing is rare~ The layout of the study has not changed over the years, the rosewood desk and chairs are still there, "Taiping Immortals" is still there on the corner of the desk, and there is still half a burner of ambergris left in the incense burner. The moment he walked in, he almost thought he was back to that morning more than a year ago. He rubbed his eyes and saw clearly that the chair was empty, with no figure as plain as a mountain or river. Ji Ruochen slowly sat down in the chair, his elbows naturally resting on the desk. His eyes followed the situation and fell on "Taiping Immortals' Notes". There is an amethyst hexagram on the cover of this book, which is temporarily used as a guarantee for the book. I planted it the year my wife died, and now it is as tall as a canopy.

Yanda's classic doesn't need too much comment.

Such a good book, but no one reviews it on Tomato? A very popular book in the past

I read in the comments that someone compared Zhu Xian to Chen Yuan. How dare Zhu Xian's shock wave be compared to Chen Yuan?

Has Chen Yuan changed a lot? Why do I feel that it is different from what I saw in the early years?